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| Daetor 2008-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseDude this story has potential, it would be a shame to let it waste, so don't abandon it now. There are too many abandoned fics on FFnet. Don't let this one become one of them. So do something about it! |
| ERROR809 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abusei like it, are you planning to continue this story? |
| Dragonmage182 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseDiggin this story. Nothing personal and all but I like this one better than the other one. Cant wait until the next chapter is posted. |
| BishiHarem 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseC'mon, kiddo, can't just leave us hangin' can ya? Keep up the great work! |
| supersniper 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abusewow lol i guess thats why it took you a while to start your story i mean look at this only 1 chapter and you got more reviews then me... ='( lol ill get over it any way i just wanted to say good job starting your story! |
| marduk-report 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abusevery interesting-i like it! |
| Despite 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHeh, this looks like fun. Misato the low-ranking slob...cool. But why did Asuka buy a cosplay school uniform? At ten years of age?! |
| Necrokon 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is an awesome story. I really like that you had Shinji and Asuka get together straight from the beginning. Have a lot of romance in this story, that's all I can say. Keep up the good writing and hurry up with chapter 2. |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNice job. Can't wait for a fight scene. Keep it up. Frost out. |
| Ragnaroek 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, I like the original aproach you've taken. I have yet to read a story that has this pair together from the very beginning, and that at the same time makes the story somewhat unpredictable which is a good oportunity to set this story apart from other similar stories. Take your time and keep up the good work. |
| Sniper-of-Death 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great story, chapters coud be a little longer though. But it's a very original idea...Yakuza? that is a new one. |
| LINKed up 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseNice story so far, very original. My only gripe so far is that sometimes your spacing is a little weird, but that can be overlooked. Anyways, I hope you get the next chapter up soon, but do take your time, thats where quality comes from. :D |