-rofl-
I could not stop laughing! It's hilarious, especially that last part... but that may be because I'm watching a comedy show, reading this, and have a sugar rush all at the same time.

Warning: Do not try that at home.

-gigglefit-

More, please!

- Delu

Heh...Indiana Avenue was always my favorite (but only because we live in Indiana xD). OMGYAOI! D: *retches* I'd much rather have Jack kiss ME, not Will. XDD And then I'd kiss Will. And then Norrington. Then Beckett. :D

Update soon!

You should make it longer before it ends...Take them shopping at the mall :P anyways, this is a funny story! keep it up.

Great story, really well-written. And funny! :) Can't wait to see how this ends!

It's really quite interesting to see a fanfic where will and jack get sucked into the writer's world instead of vice-versa. It's good... please update soon

omg i love this story its hilarious! you have to right more than just 2 more chapters!

OMG, I luv this story! Woohoo! Keep on going!X

XD Great chapter!

Update soon! ^^

ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS LEFT!?!

Noo, there needs to be alot more than that! Update asap! it's hilarious!

jb

lmao this is great. please update soon!

You SO rock, keep writing!
(and PLEASE don't injure either of the two hotties that happened to appear in a blinging flash of light)

Wow, this is a great story! Update soon please!

XD I love this story!

Update soon!

AH! UPDATE RIGHT THIS VERY MINUTE OR I'LL COME THROUGH YOU COMPUTER SCREEN AND MAKE YOU!

I love this story...very funny...to immagine what Jack would be like in this day and age...and I can so see him doing all the things that you have mentioned. I hope you will continue on with this story.