 kittychic0895 2009-11-15 . chapter 3Aw this was a good story why did u stop it u should continue |
 emogirl 2009-03-06 . chapter 3 are u gonna do anymore its a really good story plz do some more PLZ! ^.^ |
 Jazz 2008-07-17 . chapter 3 probably no use asking you to continue? since you've updated 06 last. Pity really, I enjoyed it. If you ever do continue, let me know. |
 Anonymous Reviewer 2007-07-24 . chapter 3 I really love this story! It's great! I also really like the pairing. There just aren't a lot of Krad and Riza fanfics and that makes me really upset. Anyway you're doing a great job with this story! However I am really worried since you haven't update since the August of 2006. I really hope you continue this story. Update soon! |
 Sergeant_Sam 2007-07-05 . chapter 3 So **! Cause my review didn't go through and it was pretty long.
Anyway, as usual, everything fit in perfectly and I didn't find any part of the story rushed at all.
Grandpa's death is sad but it brings a little extra drama in the story, and to me, the more conflicts a character has, the better ^^'
Story makes so much sense and is so perfect, that if continued (calmly, with your motivation/ideas back), it should actually be submitted somewhere. This would be perfect for the continuation of the original DN Angel, with the story five years into the future ^^
It's that good ^_^ |
 SergeantSam 2007-07-05 . chapter 2 Well, as promised ^_^
Normally I would think that a character such as Krad wouldn't go rushing in to a party just to chase one girl but in this case, it fit perfectly well because she had something that he wanted/needed.
I also felt that Emiko's reaction was quite appropriate, actually, and so was Grandpa's. That scene was really good too.
As for the ending of it... I loved that XD
Too bad there werent any details -- but let's not pervert ourselves, hmm? XP
Anyway, I replied to your email so make sure I'm off your spam list! ^^0 |
 SergeantSam 2007-07-04 . chapter 1 Well, i read all three chapters but i decided to review each chapter.
unfortunately, you haven't updated since last august and that worries me a bit. i'm the same way; i haven't updated my crap in over a year. except i actually get flamed and cursed at for that... apparently old reviewers keep coming back to see if there's any updates...
anyway, i would really hope you'd continue such a great story.
i really love how this first chapter thoroughly explains why risa took up thieving. it makes perfect sense and fits perfectly well. ^_^ |
 EBIL DUSTBUNNY OF DOOOOM 2007-03-05 . chapter 3No i like Emiko even more xP
I love the story, write more please ^_^ |
 PaulaLopez 2006-10-01 . chapter 3Wow, this story's getting to be REAL good...Write more as soon as possible, okay? |
 Artemis Bloodshadow 2006-09-04 . chapter 3Well, I'll say one thing for it: your story is hilarious. The thought of little meek Risa climbing building and screwing Krad is just great. ^.^ And Krad's in it. Which just tops everything thing off with the figurative whipped cream and cherry. Just one suggestion: more detail in the smut! You're killing me with these little short blurbs!
Update! |
 Hysteric Polaris 2006-08-26 . chapter 3Very interesting concept and equally interesting pairing choice. I applaud your efforts at an odd pairing. It's not always easy to publish fanfictions you know will be daring and possibly unpopular.
Although I find almost all the situations in this fanfiction unrealistic to the DNAngel storyline, you pull them off quite nicely. You throw us those curveballs alonside a compelling plotline to keep people reading despite how they feel about the pairings or unrealisticness of the situations.
One thing I'd like to comment on however is how much better your first chapter was compared to your other two. Not because it lacked lemony Risa/Krad fluff, but because it delved into the story. It told us the who's, what's, where's and why's. Krad's appearing and liking of Risa is explained only vaguely... How is Krad existing right now? Does that mean Dark is back too? Where is Satoshi and why is Krad always in constant control of him? Maybe these are some questions Risa should pose to Krad at their next meeting... All lust for the blonde-bishie aside, I'm sure those questions are some that we're all wondering at this point in the story.
However, Risa/Krad lemons were definitely a good way to get and keep reader attention...I'll give you that. |
 GSandM 2006-08-21 . chapter 3Ah I love this chapter! I wonder what Krad is planning ... Hey, if you want more reviews, my friends are looking for KRADxRISA stories, so I'll reccomend it to them because this story rox my sox! I really hope you UPdate soon. And, heh heh I guess no lady likes to be called 'old' so Emiko wasn't that much out of character, I guess. Ahh, I'm just rambling on, so sorry! I hope you UPdate soon.
C'ya next chapter!
Btw, I added you to my fav authors and this story to my fav list. Later. |
 GSandM 2006-08-17 . chapter 2It just gets more interesting! UPdate soon, I just love KRADxRISA! |
 GSandM 2006-08-14 . chapter 1I love the KRADxRISA pairing!
UPdate soon! |