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Reviews for: Spawn and SpiderMan team up
Bookworm0987
2007-03-13 . chapter 1
Plz write more! That was a awsome story.
Little-Madman-of-my-house
2007-01-22 . chapter 1
this is going to be good, please continue!
Valandil
2006-09-27 . chapter 1
really cool. but i think you should stop making run on sentences and also write slower. everything goes at a very fast pace. you could have probably streched this chapter into 3 chapters.

anyway, update soon. i cant wait to see where this story goes next.
Spawn Guy
2006-08-24 . chapter 1
That was insanely fast, full of spelling errors, and just plain to weird. Violator is strong enough to knock over Spawn and Spidey at the same time, but has to run away because of a couple of bullets that he could always shrug off? Buildings just randomly collapse? Spidey automatically knows the earth and "it's inhabitants" are in danger? And while I know Spawn is incredibly anal about keeping people out of his alleys, I doubt he'd randomly chase someone from the top of a church. Your style is as fast and confusing as an out of control roller coaster, only really short. I'd suggest getting a beta reader or spell check before righting another chapter.
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