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Reviews For: No Face - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

Neko
2008-08-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw i thought you were going to comtinue x3
animefangirl248
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story. Please update soon.
crazy-lokita
2008-06-22
ch 1,
abuseOMG! i WILL kill myself if you don't update i really really like this story so far its so diferent from others *puppy eyes* plz update soon
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2008-06-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease please PLEASE update soon! I really think that this story has a good plot, not 2 mention you have an amazing writing style. I also want 2 know what's gonna hapen next! I love how u began this story & I really REALLY want 2 know how ur gonna end it! Please update A.S.A.P!
uberhaxxor of pwnage
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseyeah, the pedophilia was a big turnoff, but i like the way you did the characters. gawd, anko was so funny, but i feel bad for her too. ur so mean...;;
Ina Sama
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseYAY!
Kiryuu
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting start! Please keep updating!
18mne
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abusehey
when r u gonna continue on??
Se-chan
2008-02-15
ch 1,
abuseI like it - it seems really... true to their characters, in a creepy, morbid sort of way.

Plus, we all know that Orochimaru is really a pedo - first Anko, then Sasuke... poor Kabuto's never gonna get any action, coz he's too old. :P Ah well.

All in all, I think it's interesting. And even if you don't continue it, it's still nice as a stand alone piece.

~ Se-chan
Wierdo-Lover
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseOh wow that was funny.Oh and the first part kinda scared me O-O. But anyway, great job!
Astrozerk
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abuseI really like this (especially when Anko kept blabbering away)this. It's well written, please update soon
eeeee.eee.eeee
2007-10-12
ch 1,
abuseHoly bat-creepiness. Ok, so I’ve read all of your Naruto stories posted here on ffnet, except for this one. And the reason for my avoiding it had to do with the fact that Orochimaru scares me something fierce. But, today I was looking around, trying to find something worthy of reading (trust me, it’s not an easy task, I browsed through so much badly written fics it was actually painful) and once frustrated decided to look around author’s pages (the top notch ones) in hopes I had overlooked something. So, knowing full well that when Orochimaru’s involved it’s usually not light-hearted at all, I ventured into this. Speaking strictly in terms of plot and characters and descriptions and all that good stuff, I can definitely tell it’s written by you, in the sense that well, it’s very good. I have never come across a piece of writing of your authorship that didn’t engage me in a way that I had to read the whole thing from start to finish with no interruptions (and that goes for “Model Mishap” too, even though it’s long, and killing me with its lack of updates, but that’s another issue…). And in my humble opinion you’re one of the few top notch authors that can make AU stories so damn good. I guess it’s even harder to write because of all the adjustments, but you always craft these stories in a way that they flow very smoothly, it all seems very plausible (Orochimaru as a coroner? Yeah, I can definitely see that). There were parts that made my skin crawl a little (ok, a lot) and I don’t think I even need to mention which, but from what I understood, you were trying to build future situations, it was necessary and pertinent, not just lost in there for shock value. I hate when authors get squeamish and tip toe around issues that make them uncomfortable (I say if you’re going to write something, then WRITE IT!). It’s just a shame that it doesn’t seem like you’re working on the continuation for this piece since it’s never seen past the prologue. Oh me oh my, seems like my review turned out a little…uh…extensive. Sorry about that. Hope to see more of your writing soon, regardless of whom it features (honestly, is there anything you can’t pull off?)
-Cherry'd
2007-10-12
ch 1,
abuseoh! yes, please do write more, this was so amazingly written, I can't wait for more!
XxxShadowxHeartxWolfxxX
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuse... I really really wouldn't mind being Anko... heh... if it means being orochimaru's neibor and he starts licking my face I'd be happy as hell. xD lol, just... (cough) kidding... (cough) kidding-right, well anyways update seriously! omg that was the best story ever and I couldn't stop reading it.

oh yeah, on the next fanfiction, since this isn't printed or anything, its on the computer, you're supposed to space out the lines more, like every two sentances, so people don't get all lost and crap, I almost did but I was so eager to find out what was gonna happen- woa thats rare- that I couldn't help it.
anon
2007-10-06
ch 1, anon.
abusemoremoremore plsplspsl update for the love of kishimoto T_T
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