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Jrik23
2009-11-04 . chapter 1
Great letter. Goku's emotions were touching. You did a really good job writing this.
Enula
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Wow...wow, really, that was absolutely amazing. I never read a story that could be this good by just writing it in letter form. You just summed up a whole series perfectly and it was just...perfect. You're an awesome writer. This definitely inspired me to write more Goku/Bulma now. I think my next story will be dedicated to you.
divahahahaha
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
this is sweet and sad ;( but i love this!
SnowLion no Miko
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
What a sweet fic. I especially liked the ending. ^_^ Great job!
Shinko
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
This pairing has always been a sensitive spot for me...I stronly believe that the relationship Goku & Bulma builded from those times so long ago when a spunky city-teenager crossed paths with that tailed mountain boy, was REALLY not taken advantage of, because of the fact the Toriyama, although a good Shounen mangaka, was just that, a SHOUNEN mangaka, and I feel sad he never understood the greatness and satisfaction he could've brought to fandom if he had Goku & Bulma end up together, as she realized, on the 23rd Tenkaichi Budokai, that that strong little boy she had always depended on to protect her and treated like a little brother, had matured into a man, a man she could ALWAYS depend on, a man that shared her love for adventure and a man that would forever love her as the woman who, so long ago, allowed her to expand his horizons.

Really nice story...Im serious, Im really happy that there's still people who like this pairing the best.
schwarzsturm
2007-10-29 . chapter 1
Ah. So touching. hm... as I recollect, it even makes sense now. Whoa. It was kinda fun to imagine gleeful Goku watching Vegeta with the crystal ball XD !
PaperThinWalls
2007-06-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful; your story got me thinking this could have happened. Not to mention that ending really hit the spot. I’m a huge supporter, though a little picky, when it comes to Goku/Bulma romances. This however, deserves total praise.

Again, nice piece of writing here, keep it up.
x GOKU x
2007-06-04 . chapter 1
This has to be the best GB fic I've read, not only because it has a VB spin to it, but also because it's very feasible to happen in canon.
Pancakes-x
2007-01-30 . chapter 1
:O aw really good. so sweet and cute. i wish u cud write like a sequeal or somethnig. damn musta taken u time to write this!
WOW!!
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
AMAZIING!
THAT WAS SO SWET!
I lurved it so much!

The end bit was so great lol!! Mr Bad Ass Vegeta flushed that super sweet note down the toilet lol! I was laughing so hard, all that love flushed in a second. I thought that was the end of that until the next note fell on the bed. That was so sweet! Way to go Goku! And Vegeta aint nothing you can do to stop Bulma getting that letter!
XTragicxBeautyX
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
It was so sweet, I loved it.
Shimmer.song
2006-10-10 . chapter 1
Aww that's soo lovely. Loved how you ended it with Goku looking on and watching over her still.
muckbleh
2006-09-22 . chapter 1
I liked it very much. I always had that feeling too or maybe I just like the idea of them having a hidden affection. Great job. :)
Lord Destroyer
2006-09-09 . chapter 1
I always thought Goku should've married Bulma instead of Chi-Chi at the 23rd World's Martial Arts Tournament. I believed that Goku had so many chances to make her his, but he kept missing out on them.
animeroxz
2006-08-26 . chapter 1
I loved it update soon. That was very good and o so sweet.
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