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| PrincessOfHeartsNYP 2007-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseActual Takari Fan is an azz don't listen to him,ur story was great!!^^ |
| XzeroXgurlX 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseAW! So cute! |
| saruwatarikoumiko 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAw poor Tk. Did Kari survive then? I really hope so ^-^ great job! Pls write more Takari fics soon ^.^ |
| puasluoma 2006-08-14 ch 1, | abuseAWW It was a really sweet fic. You should have ended it ona kiss or something like that lol |
| Actual Takari Fan 2006-08-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, it did. But not for the reasons you think. I wept for the bastardizations of TK, Davis, and Kari you put here. Nothing bad can happen because Davis isn't there? I didn't realize TK was so shallow and stupid as to think his friend is the source of all evil in the universe. All of this is one-dimensional, fake, and hollow. It's not romantic. It isn't dramatic. It's phony. It's false. It's shallow. TK's life doesn't revolve around Kari, or vice-versa. He does not have magic spiffy powers to bring her back from the dead or heal her injuries. If anyone should be there, it should be her *family* and her *Digimon partner*. Try to come up with something more original than the bland "hope and light can't exist without each other". After all this time, it reads like old cardboard tastes. Their relationship can be so much more than simply 'protecting' each other. It can have depth and strength and richness if you actually use their characterizations and not this useless drivel. Lastly, the worst thing you did: you used a real tragedy just to try to get people to read your fanfic. That's sick. |