Good story plzz continue

Update i luv it

“And Allison?” Dani asked changing the subject.

“She isn’t here. She didn’t believe me when I told her your plan, so she left me, But that’s not that point.” - This I don't not understand. Allison would've come too. She loves Danni like a sister. She also wouldn't have left Max over it.

I also don;t think Max would volunteerly help her do this.

But I really do like the story, I just don'tb like that by that one you made Allison a character to hate.

This is a little dark. i agree on you with her love for him, but I think she would've grown up to be a good girl because he would've wanted her too.

oh, there's max. PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE! I LUV UR STORY!!

where's max?

aw dani still loves Thackery

Please update.

It's really good.