Great, please write more!

*sob sob* omg, that was so...entrancing! i can't wait to continue reading!

Hey! i told u i would read it and i did so, yeah. wow, that is all i can say. im at a loss for words. that is definatly one of the best stories ive ever read, such description. i know my happy potter story sucks but, i wrote it a few years ago so, i didnt wanna bother redoing it, i just posted it, so, yeah! I will continue to read if u continue to update!

it is really good update soon why do you always have clifhanger?

Hey there! Sorry, I went back and read all of the chapters!
I hope that yo are having fun babysitting! (I am... I think.)

Great story! But I think that I found a flaw...
When Hermione was still with Malfoy (the biggest but-head in the world other than Voldamort), you had said that he had removed everything UNDER her cloak. You said nothing of her cloak being removed. We never new that she was nude until Ron and Harry 'found' her.

Oh well. luff you!

~Airwithwater

P.S. Why don't you ask them to guess your age again. I want to see the fun!
P.S.S. Dixiebaby1 and I are BEST FRIENDS in real life. :)

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jajajajja yey finally poor hermione update soon

that is great that they found her now. well... she may not be in the best shape, but they found her. cannot wait for more!

Drat... they tell you who has you on story alert huh? Ah well I guess I will start reviewing lol.. I usually do review on people's stories, but somtimes I am so busy lol. So very good! I wanna hear the next chappie now! *stomps foot on the ground* Can't wait

~The Unknown Person (The very Dump Unknown Person lol)

Hey,

I've just read your story. I love it. I think you should continue, regardless of how many reviews you get. Poor Hermione, I hope she'll be ok. And I love how love-sick Harry is! Please turn this into some nice H/Hr fluff!!

Can't wait for your next chapter.

Love Jacquianne x

this fanfic is so awesome and it can totally turn into a great story!! please update soon!!

they finally found hermione! thats great! she's going to be so mad at harry! and harry is going to be so mad at him for not looking for her sooner! can't wait for the next chapter

That was a great story! alot of suspense! update soon. :)

This is a good story so far. Maybe if you put more details and made it just a tiny bit longer it could be better. But it is still a good story and I want you to keep writing and posting chapters.

Hello there,

Just wanted to let you know how much I was enjoying your story, and I'm sorry I didn't review before. I hope you continue.

Happy writing!

*runs in* wow I must review! Very good, just a bit confusing on this chappie and the other one with the vision harry is having.. You might want to explain it from Harry's POV because most readers cannot tell if it's his vission or not. Other than that nothing else I can say bad about.

~The Unknown Person

P.S. How did you know I was reading this story??