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| darkrunner 2006-11-21 ch 1,  | abuseAw... Kawaii!! Loved the story, both of them were in character, the plot was good, it made sense, it was cute... all the storytelling aspects of this are perfect. Just watch out for the spelling and grammar and you'll be fine! Great fic, please write more! |
| Lea Smith 2006-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that that was a very lovely story. It showed a lot of passion in it, and I think that Joey and Mai do really make a great couple. Also, have you written any terror storys because I just love a good scare. |
| Kyoko Tatsunage 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet! |