Woah LOVE it!

It's a little confusing and cryptic,

but very touching. :)

Good work!

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I absolutely love this piece, and the depth it has.

This is really good! It's well-written and flows really nicely. And I love to read fics from Bakura's perspective.

OMG! That was so col!

Wow, very philosophical, I like the frequent sentences about Bakura talking about the weather and then sort of easing his way back into his musings, makes it seem more real I think. Something so trivial and then into something deeper, nice. Not to much a fan of yaoi, but nevertheless it was a nice read.

I loved reading this, although it's sweet only in the most bitter and moody of ways. (Unrelatedly, I also like being in the company of doughnuts, if only in author's notes. .) The way this ficlet describes and defines the relationship between Surface and Other is very original, intense and at the same time sense-making. I also loved the way you wrote Other!Bakura's experience of the weather; it made for some quite powerful scenes.

Very psychological. Very nice. - It make me think! And I like your word choice as well.