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| Haruka-Hime 2008-03-08 ch 1,  | abuseI absolutely love this piece, and the depth it has. |
| Niut 2007-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good! It's well-written and flows really nicely. And I love to read fics from Bakura's perspective. |
| Jay/Yumi 2006-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! That was so col! |
| BeautifulSilverSilence 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, very philosophical, I like the frequent sentences about Bakura talking about the weather and then sort of easing his way back into his musings, makes it seem more real I think. Something so trivial and then into something deeper, nice. Not to much a fan of yaoi, but nevertheless it was a nice read. |
| Misura 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved reading this, although it's sweet only in the most bitter and moody of ways. (Unrelatedly, I also like being in the company of doughnuts, if only in author's notes. ~.^) The way this ficlet describes and defines the relationship between Surface and Other is very original, intense and at the same time sense-making. I also loved the way you wrote Other!Bakura's experience of the weather; it made for some quite powerful scenes. |
| Sour Schuyler 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseVery psychological. Very nice. ^-^ It make me think! And I like your word choice as well. |