I'm dying. You killed my soul. Yami... *shuts down in corner and looks at knife longingly* I'm very easily affected by most anything so hearing this... *dies a little more* Does not happy that I'm listening to sad music... I'm faving this but i just can't read more right now.

As far as your writing, it's really not good. Not horrible, but not good. *sigh* You left out absolutely all descriptions. It's very sad. I currently have no idea what anything in the new world looks like or what the place with the gods looked like.

More please! ^_^

*hugs* It's ok if your updates aren't that often. Sheesh, I'm on my final Yugioh story and it's taking me ages to finish. I just did my latest chapter yesterday. It's not going to be on here though because of the content, but I'm happy that you've not given up the ghost on this story because I still really like it...even if it is sad. ^_^ Keep going!

Don;t worry about not updating for awhile. This was a good chapter. Keep writing...:)

Good chapter. Sounds like Yuugi has had a really hard life and a reason to be so wary of strangers. I hope they become allies and more. Yuugi really needs a friend and Atemu really needs Yuugi.

It's okay. Some updates are better than nothing! However this story is still interesting. Do update as soon as you can!

Congratulations, you finally updated! ^_^ You were starting to worry me, Dammira-chan.

So, you gonna continue it? That's great.

Yes, I noticed the Lord of the Rings line!

"I choose a mortal life"

Arwen says that in Aragorn's vision in the Return of the King (yes I'm obsessed)

I love this fic so far! You use description very well. However, a few of he lines had me confused, but I have the plot line down, so it no matter. I can still get it.

Keep writing! Ode to Puzzleshipping!

~Saphira Nakare Ruakara

i love this story! its like i can feel the emotions of the characters, very well written! please update soon, im diyng to find out whats gonna happen!

OMFG YUGI HAD BETTER COME BACK OR I'M GOING TO HURT HIM!!

Kimiru: *tosses Millennium Dagger to Miriku* You can use this. Remember, it reveals a person's true nature.

Me: YAY! ...UPDATE SOON, PLZ!!

OMFG. Yuugi is frickin' emo!!

Kimiru: I do not like the look of this...

Me: Neither do I. I gotta see what happens next...

No, I didn't see any LotR lines...I feel stupid.

Kimiru: *sigha* You're not stupid, Miriku...

Me: Yeah, yeah. OMG, this is going to SUCK...

OMG, I was practically crying...

Kimiru: *murderous glare* Bakura is such a bastard...

Me: I can't wait to see what happens to 'Temu-kun and Hikari...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!^-^