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Reviews for: Melt Into You
Bee
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
Gut! Sehr gut!
I like the simplicity of it all and the concept of blending the pleasures of the flesh and music. It works.
Good job!
-Bee
0i
2006-08-22 . chapter 1
you are so gross

Ryan & Seth are not lovers they are brothers

sicko
SpeedingCars8
2006-08-15 . chapter 1
hey that was short, easy and fast to read but i liked it

i like how you had it be about music and stuff, i liked the ending of it. you repeated lips a lot lol. that'd be funny for some kind of a chapter story where ryan and seth (who are technically brothers you sicko lol) secretly did that like instead of studying, when they each had a girlfriend hah. secret screwing.
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