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| famous99 2008-07-24 ch 11,  | abuseI don't recall reading this before and I'm glad it was rec'd over at LJ. This was beautifully written. I particularly liked how the present tense and the simplicity of the words lent a melancholy tone which was so fitting to the story line. And Ryan's discomfort just oozed over me as I read. So did the genuine love and affections for the Cohens. You know, I think I'd like to read this story from Sandy and Kirsten's POV. |
| JenScott 2007-09-11 ch 11, | abuseLove this story! I think it's really good!! |
| people usually call me fatm... 2007-04-22 ch 11, anon. | abuseyour story is so good, this is my forth time reading it and i don't usually do that ... it never like ever crosses my mind, ryan getting amnesia .. hmm, i don't think it crossed anybody's mind... so do not stop here, continue and write more stories that have the same story line... anyhow, keep up the good work .. |
| dreamgirl93 2007-02-10 ch 9, | abusethis is very good. sad but good. poor seth, poor ryan. keep up the good work |
| BlackHalliwell 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseawesome |
| Rachel Carter McKenzie 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseAw loved the story...good work! |
| forgottenletters 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseAw that was a great ending. Very simple, but it had just what it needed. I am sad that it's over, but I can't complain. |
| Leentje 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseThis was a very very good story! thank you for writing it :) bye bye and keep writing so i can keep reading ;) |
| pm153 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseAw, what a sweet simple ending. I find it interesting and realistic that Ryan didn't have some sudden epiphany where all his memories come flooding back to him, because more than often in these days, that rarely happens. I love how you showed Ryan's struggle for information about his life. And it was great how even with no memory, Ryan still had the same doubts and insecurities about living with the Cohens. The "why"-"why not" makes total sense also. Awesome job, can't wait to see more stuff from you. |
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseaww great stuff |
| Ruusukainen 2006-11-18 ch 11, | abuseNyyh. I still don´t know what to say. Your Ryan is the one I like to read about. Especially in this story. I´m gonna miss it and I hope you will write more Ryan-stories soon. (: Meanwhile, I´m going to read your old drabbles. (; |
| Fanny 2006-11-18 ch 11, anon. | abuseIt was a very good story, sad that it's over :) |
| Melster 2006-11-12 ch 10, anon. | abuseYour Kirsten / Ryan is so wonderful - another brilliant chapter !! and again glad to see the TBC - you are a fabulous writer ! Thanks |
| Leentje 2006-11-12 ch 10, | abuseVERY VER VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON BYE BYE |
| SparkRocker 2006-11-11 ch 10, | abuseawesome...i like the kirsten/ryan bonding... |