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TakerTakeMe
2009-12-05 . chapter 27
Linda is clueless, isn't she? She claims to want the best for Stephanie, the best husband, but it doesn't seem like she even cares that Chris loves Stephanie and makes her happy. Why won't she and Vince get their heads out of their asses and just go to the wedding? They're going to be missing out.

Shane is a good guy. I wasn't sure if he was going to really change but he has and I love it. It's awesome to see him loosen up and have fun. I don't expect him to loosen up enough to wear a coconut bra and a hula skirt like Chris but he's getting there!

I love Chris's parents, have I mentioned that? =)

~J
TakerTakeMe
2009-12-05 . chapter 26
Chris and Stephanie are the most random people ever in this story. It's like they have this secret language or something and you have to be completely random to understand the points they try to make in their conversations. Luckily I'm random so I get it! But I don't think the people around them would understand and that's why they're so perfect for each other. I really don't know how he almost married Trish when it's so obvious that Stephanie is his perfect match.

The way they keep talking about not having a traditional wedding makes me wonder, how weird is this wedding going to be? Lol. I can't wait to see! And then there's this engagement party coming up, is Trish going to crash it? Hm.

Great chapter, sorry my review is so late.

~J
Glamagirl
2009-11-15 . chapter 27
Shane, I have a soft spot for him! Good thing Stephanie is making him realize that life is not only about work and making his parents proud and nonsense like that! He's loosening up and I love it.
Chris and Steph = Crazy O.o
Daniella Consuela
2009-11-12 . chapter 27
Stephanie and Chris are crazy. But oh boy has Shane came a long way or what? He's more open than he was in the first story and earlier in here..that's really good. Such an improvement. I gotta say I didn't remember Chris' mother being that open, calling Shane part robot and all. LOL! I could so see Shane getting a little intimadated and scared..that was cute. I look foward to more.
Jodi
2009-11-11 . chapter 27
Omg, this was amazing! I like adore Stephanie in this story, I just love how she is in this, she's hilarious! The never shutting up thing is my fave part, she could just ramble on and on and everything she says I'd laugh at. I love how she smiled when Shane laughed, cause I did too, that emotion chip sure is working. I'm also glad that Shane is seeing that he's lived his parents life and is starting to break free. You can so tell the contrast between Linda and Loretta, Loretta was so welcoming and Linda was just...a robot. I hope Linda and Vince see Shane at the party somehow, I think that would be cool.

You know I adore this story and I cannot wait for more. I really can't.

jodi
dodjet
2009-11-11 . chapter 27
Chris in a coconut bra?? lol I want pictures! I loved it. I'm glad that Shane sees that Chris makes Stephanie happy and is accepting it all. Sounds like Loretta almost scared him but in the end he's liking Chris' family and loving the fact that they love Stephanie so much. It's too bad Linda still looks down on Chris as not being good enough for her daughter. Hopefully she'll come around before the actual wedding. Great update!
Daniella Consuela
2009-10-02 . chapter 26
Help Shane huh? This party is gonna be the only way Chris and Stephanie know to live life..to have fun. It's gonna be fun and I'm ready. :)
Glamagirl
2009-09-30 . chapter 26
There two are crazy! Lol, I love them, and I like that they still love each other so much!
I'm going to say this again, I'm so glad that Shane got around and decided to be a part of the wedding, can't wait to see what they'll do for the ceremony itself because I have a feeling that the only traditional thing about it will be Shane walking Steph down the isle! Haha
Trish... she is not plotting anything is she? I hope no!!
Great update, I'm here hoping that Mr & Mrs Roboto will change their minds and attend the wedding!
missbean1997
2009-09-29 . chapter 26
These to are the greatest and the banter is just so outof this world i love it
Katie
2009-09-29 . chapter 26
These two are just absolutely crazy and I love it. They're so cute and so in love with each other, but they're also really good people, especially because they want to help Shane loosen up and he really does need it, I hope it works!
dodjet
2009-09-29 . chapter 26
OMG these two are absolutely bonkers lol The way they rattle on back and forth at each other is hilarious. I'm not sure I'd want to be around people like that in real life lol but it's cute in this story. Although, on second thought, if the guy looked like Chris? I'd want to be around him ;-) Speaking of his looks, the whole part about how tragic & how much the entire world miss him if his face went splat in a skydiving accident was funny and fit his personality in the story perfectly. This story is definitely different but I enjoy it a lot!
Daniella Consuela
2009-08-07 . chapter 25
Chris and Stephanie are just so silly. I'm glad they had lunch...or was it dinner with Shane? Either way..nice part on all of them for meeting up and hanging out. Glad Shane's lossening up. :)
TakerTakeMe
2009-08-01 . chapter 25
I am so proud of the way that Shane is coming around now! Maybe he's not the huge jerk that I originally thought he was. I guess all he really needed was for Stephanie and Chris to get him alone and corrupt him...I mean, show him what life can be like if he lives it without taking orders from his parents! I wonder if he even expected to receive an invitation from them in the first place... I do like the way he's thinking, and that he realizes that what his parents are doing to Stephanie is wrong!

Stephanie and Chris are their usual crazy selves, and I love that. I love how they can be themselves and be lost in their own little world, no matter where they are. I also love how hard they were trying to make Shane feel like he fit in. It's great.

The last line seems symbolic to me. He's going to let loose, I can feel it! And I'm ready, I'm ready, I'm ready-eady-eady (Spongebob style).

Great update, Queen...um...Nina!

~J
Glamagirl
2009-07-31 . chapter 25
Go Shane! Go Shane! Unbutton! Get Lose...
Anyway, I loved Shane's POV on Chris & Stephanie, and I love how they were just standing there, waiting for him to arrive!! So cute!

It's good that Shane is taking baby steps away from his parents, if only they would see the light too! That would be awesome!

Mexican restaurants rule! Love that the chose one to eat with Shane =)

Now, I have to tell you this, I have a story going on where Chris calls Stephanie, Stephers... It was not until I read this that I realized that maybe, I unconsciously took it from this story... has he always call her like this in this story? Please don't think I'm trying to copy you, because I couldn't even if I tried lol

Loved the update!

~*Nani*!
Jodi
2009-07-31 . chapter 25
Dude, you know I loved this, I really enjoyed it a lot. I love how Shane is trying to break free, even if he doesn't know it yet. He is going against the norm and he should, what his parents are doing is wrong, you don't treat your daughter that way.

What I loved the most was the picture of Stephanie and Chris just standing there, just all silent with Stephanie's head resting on Chris's shoulder, it really made me smile. I also love how they are so in-tune with each other, that they know how the other thinks and how they should order.

I'm glad Shane is trying with his sister and seeing, that she may be unique, it doesn't make her a bad person.

I cannot wait for the wedding.

Jodi
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