good try, but i would prefer that you din't imitate rogue's accent in words. a bit confusing for the reader at times. other wise, it's a great story. as a gambit fan though, i wish you created a happy ending. don't like to see my fave character die...

it can't end like that you have to continue i have to know and yes very good

2 sad 4 me. z.

I liked it a lot, but I don't quite see how you can do a sequal now that both Remy and Rogue are dead.

I think I've read this before-and I still like it as much as the first time...even though I am a die-hard Gambit : ) I'd personally like to see a sequel. Kudos!

hey KazeRogue it's Mara i like the story and you so have to make a sequel

That was so sad! :(