I LOVE IT SO MUch!

It SCREAMS MOSES X JAY!

hehehhe that was cute and funny!LOL although i felt very frustrated for Jay, as I too, have been stuck in a blanket wrapping-_- But aside from that, very well done!_ Kept everyone in character!

Poor JJ! Hahahaha! Y'know that was almost perfectly in character! great job! I can imagine Moses doing something like that. I'm glad Jay got his revenge!

AHAHAHAHAHA! That...seriously..kicked...ass! Write more, please!

awsome! Poor Jay being all sick...

I'm one of those people who buys the game like a year after it comes out and then gets all obsessed and starts reading fics, and everyone is already on to the next thing, and this time, that game was Tales of legendia XD Was cracking up through this whoel fic. The game's actually my girlfriends and we play it together when she comes over. lol every time i see the intro when senel and shirley hold hands she grabs my hand too. i sent her the link to this and im still crakcing up writing this. best fic ever, we're both so obsessed.

Jay Jay Jay! D

That must of been so horrible. Poor Jay. He got his revenge though. Good. Stupid Moses...got what was coming to him. Should of left Jay alone. n_n

The bath part was the best, though. Keep writing! You rock!

That made me smile. D Faves!

Oh wow.

My friend recomended this story to me and what a wonderful first impreesion I've gotten from

I really did like it! You did a good job of keeping in-character even with quite an original idea.

I've not got time now, but I promise to read your other Legendia works. Looking forward to them much. n_n

Funny and cute! Very good! GO JAY!

That was Great! I loved that!

This has got to be the best thing Ive ever read in my life. XD No one was out of character, it was the most halarious thing ive ever read, well written, and Jay knocks the crap out of Moses in the end. XD Truly, truly priceless.

You should make a sequal. XD This illustrates how stupid Moses REALLY is. XD Truly amazing.

He he he... I read this on the Tales forums and it cracked me up! I especially like the ending. The best part about this story is that you manage to keep everybody in character, even though in this kind of story the character's would usually get really OOC. Great job, keep up the good work!

OMG Yay another Jay fan! D

I died laughing at least ten times throughout this story...it was great! If I hadn't had to go to dinner, I'd be crying with laughter...darn food for interrupting my fun T_T

*still laughing at the ending*

Yay! Great story! Haha that was funny, seeing Jay so helpless with Moses torturing him... mwahahaha! That was an evil plot, but me like!

Please keep writing stories!