I love it! I also LOVE Fang!

Sorry to diss James Patterson, Since he is god of thriller stories, but he's effed up a great series by making those new books

We LOVED your story. It was totally realistic. It ALMOST sounded like James Patterson himself. We thought they both were ABSOLUTLY AMAZING and PLEASE write more!! (Hows that for praise?)*laughs in evil way*
We also thing that it would sound better if there was more romance with Max and Fang.

I loved it! The sword fight was so funny! You are a great writer, keep it up!

Wow, you are like an AWESOME writer, with totally original ideas! I LOVE it! You just HAVE to write another chapter, like, NOW! I kind of want more Max/Fang stuff though. Out of all Fanfiction stories + writers, you are my favorite, EVER. You have best storylines and plots. Could you please put a LITTLE bit more romance in here though? That would be awesome. My last advice: WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER RIGHT NOW PLEASE!

zomg :D this is so awesome and cutee!! :) i loved it moree please?

This is really good. =) i love how detailed you are. More Please! =)

it was awesome! so great!

it was amazing! i love it !

Nice job it really sounded like part of the book I was really into it. Wright again soon I want to read it

I DEMAND MORE! No, seriously, this was really good. I think you should write more! I like how everyone dressed up as angels, except Fang, the devil. :)
TbO

Awesome write another!

That was soo cool write another!

YES! i loved it! IT WAS AWESOME !plz right more!

this was a great chapter! I love that the flock went as themselves! The swordfight was pure genius, and i liked when Fang hit the eraser with his sack of candy! Pure genius! (So is James Patterson!) ru writing more?!