Please Please Please continue this story!
I liked the fact that Audrey didn't automatically fall in love with bruce - that she fights him completely! This has to be one of the better batman stories!
Please continue the story!

This story is freakin' amazing!

I am going to beg you to update it, please? I can't tell you how refreshing it is to read really good fanfiction.

Ha! That last exchange made me laugh really hard! I was waiting for the result of his grapefruit murder to be mentioned, lol. I am a little confused at which last name they have, you have called both Audrey and Ronnie McKenzie and Jones.

NO DAMN IT. You can't leave it there! Please, PLEASE WRITE MORE. This is the best damn BB fic I've ever read, and that's the honest truth! Please...this can't be complete, you can't discontinue this. Please. After seeing The Dark Knight (if you saw it), maybe you might feel a little inspired to go on with this, if not make a sequel? PLEASE.

i love it! Update Soon!

this has to be the most amusing batman fic i have ever read. Its a shame you've finished writing for this but at least you leave me to imagine my own multiple endings

GAH! THE SEXUAL TENSION IS KILLING ME! This is such an awesome story and I get such a kick out of Bruce and Audrey's fights. The pope/holy water thing made me crack up. Actually, there was a bunch of things that made me crack up especially the part where Audrey admits SHE even doesn't give a damn about the turtles. Hahhahaha. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon! I know it's been awhile but please please please please continue!!

~ Jenn

Wont take 6 months huh? lol. Its okay, i understand busy schedules and writers block, but could you please please please update soon? I love this story! Kinda hate Ronnie, but love Audrey.

ahh i love this! had me laughing out loud!

update soon

This is really good! Fantastic stuff! I hope you update soon!

PLEASE UPDATE!
Seriously, best batman fanfic I've read!
AND BEYOND AWESOME OC!
But keep her saracastic and stuff, it seems whenever I like an OC, they end up getting all fluffy and icky at the end.

Yes...I SAID ICKY!

If you update this I shall give you cookies
and love.


But mainly cookies!

BUT STILL LOVE!!

UPDATE!

Is this this fic really about Batman? Because I can't find him anywhere. Seriously, I've never read a more out-of-character Batman. First off, Bruce's swearing in the earlier chapters was slightly ridiculous, I've only read him swearing like that when he's written by Frank Miller, and you're no Frank Miller. Also, Bruce dates supermodels to keep up his foppish facade, he doesn't get engaged to them, and he certainly doesn't tell them he's Batman. Remember, the playboy is the mask, and Batman is his true personality.

Slightly nitpicky: You state this as being strictly Batman Begins-canon, yet the chapter before you say this Talia randomly shows up at the manor. Talia wasn't in Batman Begins. Nor was she mentioned. However, kudos to you for including someone from the comicverse. Look, it doesn't sound like you've ever read/watched anything other than Batman Begins, and even that movie doesn't allow Batman to be written like this. Maybe if you read some comics, you would have a better grasp of his personality and realize why this fic doesn't make any sense.

P.S. The Toupee?? Come on, you can do better than that. I know Batman rogues have weird names, but none that dumb. You could just as easily have had it been Clayface or Killer Croc or some villain that actually exists.

never and i mean never have i read a fanfic that made me laugh as much as this one has and i haven't even finished reading it! i really love it

Hey, I'm new to this fandom, and I really like your story. It's twenty times better than all of the other Bruce/OC stories I've found.

I love that you've given your character an unusual eye color but that it's never referred to as "stunning" or "ethereal" or something along those lines, just "strange" or "unusual." She's a cool character, from her odd eyes to her bad temper to her "Hermione Granger" hair.

I also like that you're taking the romance slowly; it helps add to the characterization, something that is usually a weak point in romance fics.