It's really good but can u try to make the chapters longer?

O, this sounds really good! I can't wait to know why they were summoned, so please update soon!

This is really good. Although a bit short in chapters but really good. I enjoyed reading all five chapters. Your descriptions of the characters are on spot and canon-close. Sora's goofy but not so. Riku does have a sense of humour and Kairi - I adore her. I'd love to see where you go with this.

Awesome!

You may not have written it, but it IS almost verbatim. I'd have to beat Xemnas again to make sure, though. Great chapter, even if you didn't originally write it! UPDATE ASAP!

Kouji-wolf

Great chapter, Arowen! I completely agree with you in respect to Riku. He IS awesome in the new game.

ANYWAY, will Kairi read that book when they most need the information?

I'd better go read your next chapter!

Wo! Your story's so cool! I love it ay! You gotta keep going! So cool! 0.0

Axel.

but i thought he liked Sora

ok so i have to review here because i already reviewed chapter 3. ugh i hate that rule. anyway i love this story so much. it's a way to keep us from not killing the creator of kh for leaving us the way he did. anyway when are you gonna update this story? or your other avatar story fire and water. i've been a big fan since the first and i want to see that updated too. please. whatever will i do if i don't see another chapter! please! thanx! =)

wow, this is the best Kingdom Hearts story I've read so far! Good job! Keep up the good work!!

Wasn't Saix, the Luna Diviner, Number Six? I thought he was. Zexion was a different number, I think. I'll admit; I haven't played the game since about July, so I might be wrong. Great chapter, though!

Was the guy in black Axel? He was the one always spelling things out and asking if you had it memorized. But who was the hooded guy? UPDATE ASAP!

Kouji-wolf

Hey! AXEL! I love the way this story is going! Please keep it up! I can't wait for the next update!

yay you finally reviewed! about time. update soon as soon as you can

A very well written chapter! I liked your explaination at the bottom. I'd never thought about it before... Well, I've always wanted to know about Zexy, but, you know, I never thought about all the clues that he could be used in the third game...
~Padfoot

That was Axel... Definitely...