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| Anakinluver6 2007-03-14 ch 1, | abuseits short... but i like it it reminds me of me and my friend we have the same relationship except without the powers =P |
| The Chibi's Are Stalking Me 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abuseCOOL!! Whatddaya mean you can't write in Rob's POV?? This is AWESOME!! |
| Coolteenzz 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseWow..that is awesome. You're pretty good at writing from Rob's pov..*added to favourites* |
| Stoic Last Stand 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseFor someone who claims to be 'not good' at a Robin POV you did a bloody good job!! Britishness is showing through...ah well. I loved it!! My sister and I were discussing this the other day (she's an avid BB/Rae shipper as well) and came to the same conclusion. Both Robin and Raven are so alike, the two would drown in each other's darkness if they were to 'get together' per say. Another brilliant one shot. Excellent |
| ravenslair 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was well written, and though I don't agree with your reasoning why they would never be together, I do respect it. Gerry |
| CalliopeMused 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseRobin and Raven are friends. People tend to get so caught up in the Shipper Wars that they forget that it's a team- Raven is Starfire's friend, not a rival. Raven can be friends with Robin (see the excessive examples in The End, etc.), hug Beast Boy, and smile for Cyborg while remaining friends with Starfire- but you don't need that rant, because you understand these kids. Robin's point of view might be hard, but you're tougher than he is- and you write damned well, as always. (Any other adjective wouldn't fit. Sometimes, precision is more important than keeping everything G.) If you can write from Robin's POV- well, I think anyone can tell you could write anything that you dream up, and it'll always turn out this well. |
| Kayasuri-n (the lazy) 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnd yet people will believe this is somehow romance... Lovely introspection, Lamb. I don't know why you told Doc that I would probably not like it. (Doc's a tell-all, sometimes, don't you think?) This is quite nice- the main problem I have with 'dear Richard' is that he's written as a jerk. So... yeah, no jerk here, just nice, thoughtful twit who's thinking on himself and his sister-of-sorts. I liked it. And if I could be bothered to log in, I'd probably fave it and then put it in spotlight section of my profile. Hm... maybe tomorrow. |
| the summerbee 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAlthough I myself am a Rob/Rae shipper, I enjoyed reading this. You're a very good writer and the story kept me interested the whole way through. Excellent work! |
| RobRae5000 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseHm. You write well. I'm impressed. The dark side, eh? :) I like dark intense stuff, but that's me, so there we go. But honestly, I did like it. You have a good writing style and everything was neat and tidy. It was nice to have met you! Good job with the story. |
| RavenWriter89 2006-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI like it. The friendship spin is unique, and you describe it really well. Keep it up! |