heh heh heh

I love it!

Please do update soon!!

Wow oh noes what will happen to Rikku? You should try to add more to this, because it's good. Like, really good. A little AU, but you've set it out well, paced it well. Please continue.

It's so realistic that when Rikku started crying i teared up to :)

Aw *melts*

-pouts- Tari-chan, you really, really need to update this! It's been forever and a few months!

I read this that long ago, but checking over my reviews, I guess I forgot to review it! Heh, don't mind me.

Anyways, fantabulous chapter! At least you didn't kill Rikku off (Like I probably would have). Good work with your writing and other than a few little grammatical errors (commas or something like that XD), it was a grand read (or re-read in this case).

Well, anyways again, I'm heading to bed. Now, because I said so - UPDATE!

Cheers!

Chibi

Hello Tari! This is your loyal-yet-internet-deprived reader reporting in. please excuse the fact that I can't review people as often as I should, for you see, I have no internet at home, and I have to use my friends screen name. I have printed out the chapters of Please Remember though, and have spent a fair amount of time contemplating what to say in order to best use my time. I will tackle them one chapter at a time, like so.
1
that was one of the best put-together begining chapters I have read. Usualy I have to read to the second chapter to get interested. As for pointers to improve your work, the only thing I can see is that you tend to run on a bit. your sentences are too long. While they aren't tecnicly run-on sentences, they bring to mind that person who will speak for hours without taking a breath. lol. Remember, this is an easy trap to fall into. Whenever I write something, I usualy have to completly redo entire paragraphs for this same problem. But on the upside, your descriptions and wordplay are up there with the best.

2
I LOVE the narritive style you have chosen. Something like that would never have occured to me! Just make sure you don't fall inro the trap of being too tied down to this patern. If two chapters in a row are the ones that really should be told by Auron, then tell them from his pov. Just use the most appropriate pov for the situation, and the pattern will establish (sp?) itself. after a while, you will be surprised how often the story writes itself.
Oh, and Auron can be verry harsh sometimes, but his heart is in the right place.

3
A. thx, you rock too. B. poor girl, seniordom sucks, dosen't it? not that I know from personal experience...yet...but I've witnessed it with my big sister. C. That ending is called the cliff hanger, and it's a good plot device. Just don't over-use it, k?

4
coolness in general, nothing much else to report.

5
I realy must commend you on the line 'even in sleep, Rikku tended to be irksome.' I love this line!! but girl, you really need to post another chapter soon, b/c my sanity depends on it!!

Whew! that took a while, but it's done. Please enjoy.

I freaking LOVE your writing style, and I'm pretty sure I reviewed your last chapter, and I -think- I have an account here o_O Oh well, I'm loving this stuff you're producing and...
*pout*
I WANT A REAL LIFE AURON!/complain
I noticed that you like the OC. I personally hate it but because we're Aurikku girls we can get over it. (Oh, by the way, they axed the OC :D)

ooh how i luv aurikku fanfics... and this chapter! cant wait till chapter 6 is up! :3

Awesome! Please keep it up.

Awh! Great story, please continue writing it!!

yeah ! yeah ! yeah ! This is not a meaningless chapter, but I think that's a preview of the great next chap six that expect us *O*.
Never give up, I like it so much !

Yay another chapter! :3 I'm soo happy. I was really bored so i'm very greatful for this chap :) Luf ya:*

I sense . . . Aurikku fluff! Thanks so much for updating . . . Hope to find and see more soon.

Hugs, and Aurikku love to you,
Drache

Hey. I'm glad you're still writing this. I thought maybe it had been abandoned.

...rabbit...okay...

Take care.

-growls- Took ya long enough. I had to go back and reread it just to play catch-up! I'm kidding of course, well not about rereading. But still very enjoyable nonetheless. But one thing, Spira sure has some strange weather. Rain, sun, cloudy, rain..Or maybe it was just a cloudburst? Next time, no wait so long?

As a side note, I just thought of what we could do with Bitchalesca. When I was back writing Hearing Voices, I was threatened to be fed to the shoopuff. But instead of that, how about if she gets trampled by a herd of shoopuffs??!! Or, or, or, we can set her up with Seymour? Laterz! Gin