That was very good! Wish you could have carried on!

really good ending, intriguing. I like it!!

AH! LOL That's awesome. I can totally see it. WOW. Poor Alex. This is great, and it totally makes sense.

That was so hot! i mean it was so good. thank you so much for writing more! You rock! :)

Holy Cow. Well done, I'm loving this, and hoping you continue.

You've certainly stimulated my brain. This was well done. You definitely captured what I would think would be in Eames' head. Did you plan to continue this, I really hope so. Your grasp of surroundings is perfect. This is going to sound really cliched, but I felt like I was right there with Alex. When an author can do that it is a sure sign of an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing this.

hey there i loved it, are you going to go with this? i really hope you do because Alex must of had a good reason to the shoot the fella. anyway great job!

Definitely not any of the canon shootings. LOL But I like it. Really, I do. This was very well done. :) I can picture it. Poor Alex. Now I'm all curious as to who exactly this suspect was and what he did that she hated him so much. LOL