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| Foy 2007-06-04 ch 7,  | abuseokay so, you said the chappie is 'short and crappy'. first, short is not allways a bad thing! short is good every now and then when u want to keep the readers' attention. i kno from my experiance as a reader. just please dont do it too often. its not good for ppl with anxiety issues. (im not one of them, but still!) second, crappy? CRAPPY?! it is NOT crappy! it is awsum! i cant wait to read more! post more soon! |
| Cold Drake Queen 2007-06-02 ch 7, | abuseVery interesting. A trip into the mind of mind freak. I wonder where this is going. |
| Evil lobster girl 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseHarry Potter and X-men at once. Why have I not read this story before? I really like it. You write all the characters really well. Your plots are amazing too. Please go on. |
| Foy 2007-05-30 ch 6, | abusenow YOU have an imagination. love the chappie, post more soon! |
| Foy 2007-05-14 ch 5, | abuseyou are briliant. its awsum! keep writing! |
| Cold Drake Queen 2006-11-19 ch 4, | abuseOh to fun with the craziness. You should have Danny take out a few knomes just for fun. |
| sango taijiya1 2006-11-14 ch 4, | abuseI liked this chapter alot! I just hope that Dannys hair turns back to long white. I like how you're tieing in X-men with HP, I just hope that you don't totally follow by what happened in OoTP. By the way, I really liked the wyvern and how you described it, I hope we see more of Nico. |
| Lady Shalafay 2006-11-13 ch 4, | abuseThis is a damn good story. I love the detail and I look forward to more. The Hierarchys are cool too. |
| sango taijiya1 2006-11-12 ch 3, | abuseI've read your fic and noticed how long ago you last updated. I wanted to say that I adore your fic, I can't wait until Harrys world joins in! Although Danny seems like a Mary Sue, I still like her character, she has a very vivid personality! Anyways, if you discontinued your fic, than you must re-continue it; but if you plan to keep on writing it than I hope you update soon!! |
| Ken 2006-10-26 ch 3, anon. | abusepretty damn good. keeo uot he good work and please get the next chapter out soon |
| dark-dreamer-99 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseomg i'm lost still but i don't watch the caroon so... |
| Cold Drake Queen 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHe he ... I love the hierarchies ... they are so wild and untameable ... but she did it ... |