This was really good! A nice little story to read ^^

Aww, that was cute! :)

Me like, yes?
Hehe xD

Very descriptive and well written, I like this pairing, good job.

I love HieiShizu, but if I hadn't, I believe your story would have converted me. It's not thrown in your face or so quiet you can't catch it. I love how Shizuru considers all the guys she's loved too. I hope you do another.

It's... I don't know what to call it. Subtle, but intense. Very much like Hiei and Shizuru.

This is beyond amazing! The words just flowed creating this great scene between them and the thoughts. I loved it all!!

very nice. hope you have more for these two. most shizuru X hiei pairigns i've read either turned up missing or not updated. anyway, this is real nice. :D