I like where you're going with this story; I do see potential for a longer fic. I hope you write more; Sato and Risa are my favorite DN Angel couple.

Actually, this is very passionate! It would be better with more complex words, and unusual adjectives. Other than that I like it!

YAY!

There's nothing that I didn't like about this! It's so sweet! _ by the way...what happened between them two? I'm curious. D I'll be looking forward to that DN Angel long story you're planning, hope to see it up soon!

That was good - I really liked it! Kudos to good storie! _

Awesome story. I love your writing style _

That story is VERY VERY VERY GOOD.I've always love Satxris' i loved this fic too.I've found out that u have talent writing these fics(SatxRis)so,continue these,please...I'm expecting your works,good luck!

Wow! That was so kawaii! I like this pairing, and I think it's just fine other than one or two mistakes, A! _ Real sweet!