 Neeps513 2009-09-01 . chapter 4LOVE IT! but i would like to know Hermione's reaction to the house... sequel? |
 mom2divas 2009-01-23 . chapter 4This was beautifully written. Misunderstandings can really cause damage. I'm glad they were able to work through it. |
 hermeres 2006-12-21 . chapter 4Fabulous story. I absolutely love it. Reminds me of my story in subtle ways. :>
Hermeres |
 Darque Hart 2006-10-27 . chapter 4I chose this of all your stories to read because it was '4 chapters long'. I read in your bio section that you don't read stories that are any shorter. I actually do not read 'drabbles' because they are so short, so regardless of the quality or effort that has gone into telling a whole tale in as few words as possible, I won't be reading the rest of your stories, which I liked very much. |
 Perselus 2006-08-27 . chapter 4Wonderful story, I loved every bit of it. The part of the brothel and the potions was heart-breaking. And thanks for linking to our cottage project. It's really cool to know that was the house you had in mind. ;) |
 abc 2006-08-27 . chapter 4 Exellent story! I honestly loved everything about it. From the title, to the explainations for Severus's supposed infidelity- everything just fit. It was really great how you filled in all the gaps.
You're a gifted writer, KEEP ON WRITING!!
-abc :) |
 amsev 2006-08-20 . chapter 4Ah, Droxy, but that was simply lovely. Thank you. |
 teshara 2006-08-20 . chapter 4aw!! |
 snapeophile 2006-08-20 . chapter 4I love the multi-layered format of this fic. So much is going on at all times. You created a very well-rounded Severus, and his 'introspection' scene was a wonderful idea--so "Severus" to go off and almost disbelievingly count his blessings. Also his uncertainty regarding their relationship rings very true. The scene where they view his rejection of Hermione's seduction is really poignant. LOL--'wine laced with Amortentia.'
A lovely work, drox, you should be very proud of your accomplishment! |
 tpring 2006-08-20 . chapter 4 beautiful story. |
 duj 2006-08-20 . chapter 4Fluffy ending. |
 June W 2006-08-19 . chapter 4 Fabulous story!! I'm so glad things worked out, although she's right that Crookshanks would've been a quicker and easier test. I love the artwork; very cute house. So now Hermione will help him with those potions, and for such a worthy cause - helping war victims and survivors. Such poignant stories, those people covered under cloaks, and Hannah's father, and Harry remembering Ron. Thank you so much for sharing this with al of us! |
 notwritten 2006-08-19 . chapter 4okay |
 KellyRoxton 2006-08-19 . chapter 4I really enjoyed your story :) I hope you have another one planned soon... I loved how he walked in on her walking out and the ending made me tear up a little you hit it purrfectly on the head...
HuGSS to you,
Kelly |
 Transylvanian 2006-08-19 . chapter 4Good story. |