OMG! O.O This chapter was so worth the wait. xD Keep up the good work. ^^

Oh. My. Goodness.
This is fantastic. I love the way you write. A small sentence contains enough poignancy to say it all. Just beautiful. I like how Vincent seems to have adapted somewhat.
I look forward to continuing this. No doubt I'll be up for hours, having found this.

Yey! An update! ^__^

Truth be told...I haven't been on this site since...march I think... eh heh... ^__^;;

AH!

Yeah, that was part of my reaction when I got the email alert about the story update. The other part was some less-than-flattering celebratory body gyrations. I won't elaborate.

So happy that you're back in the saddle again!

You know, as this story continues, I really do feel a bit of pity for Vincent. There are times when a guy's gotta wonder, "When will something just go /right/ for once?" I hope he gets his happy ending.

okay, i haven't read the chapter yet, but i must comment first! i must explain to you how wonderfully ecstatically HAPPY finding this update alert in my inbox made me! this truly is one of my top five favorite fanfictions of all time, your overall style one of the (personally) most inspirationl... i really love your work. A week ago i re read this story from the beginning, and am overjoyed to see it updated so soon after i had. I know it's a fantastic chapter, and i'm glad you've begun working on this again!!

Ah! So good to read this again! I've missed you a lot. I hope life's been treating you well. When I saw the notification for a chapter in my inbox I immediately perked up! What a great surprise. As ever, this is excellently written, with tone, pacing and flow that one would find in any published book. I loves this to bits and hope to see more soon! Ever yours, LunarBlade.

I'm really glad to see a new chapter for this. I thought this was going to be left unfinished, which would have been a shame. I liked this chapter because you showed more of Cloud and Vincent's relationship. While they did have a talk a few chapters back, it's interesting to see how the deal with each other regarding the situation. The circumstances allow for a lot of drama and emotions. You really have a gift for setting modes and tones through character dialogue and not simply through descriptions of the settings or whatnot. This chapter, and the story as a whole, has been fantastic.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

Good God, it's been a while... lol. Not to sound ungrateful, but wow what a wait.

Despite that, the chapter flowed really, really well, I quite enjoyed it. The threat of an outburst between the adults is still there, more of a background feeling, but it's there, and I know it all too well. Having to be nice to someone that you don't want to be and all that jazz... Horrid feeling, but flowed well within the story. I could actually 'feel' the tensity and the biting humor, I loved it. Short chapter, read it in about 20 minutes, but I still enjoyed my time.

Revise chapter 10? But why would you want to do that? =P

Again though, like every other chapter I've reviewed, it was grand. This may be a first, but I feel like I can actually give some advice for the story. Longer chapters! lol. Not sure if that's advice, or simply a request, but I love stories with chapters that take nearly an hour to finish. I know that's a lot of work, so I expect nothing. =P

I'll spare you the long details of what I thought when I opened my e-mail to find a notification about a new chapter, but here's the GREATLY shortened version...

"New Agape chapter?! YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY..." and it continues like that for about 10 minutes before I could calm myself down enough to read it lol.

Great chapter; I've always really loved this story and I missed it! So glad to look in my inbox today and see that I had updates from two of my favorite authors!

I love that this is from Vincent's point of view, and I love the way you've written his character. Sometimes he seems so static that I just get stick of reading VinTi fiction, sick to death actually, so this is totally a refreshing breath of air.

Really love reading Vincent's thoughts, following his line of reasoning- so interesting to read and entertaining.

Also, if Tifa doesn't want him- I'll take him!

Glad you're back! Good luck with writing and life in general!

C.Nichole

Great chapter

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so what will happen now... yay for that promise... stupid Cloud

I missed the masturbation reference! Darn it!

Very good chapter!

I sometimes had to feed my MOTHER french fries while she drove... if only she were Vincent :P

Tifa is being a little spoiled imo... I hope she lightens up soon.

And yes I got his frowns and brooding and smexiness in this chap :D

It's pointless for me to tell you what I'd like because you've already written the next chapter... but hopefully I'll see some of it in the coming chapters... more brooding looks from Vincent... so hott... maybe his normal frown is a jaw dropping look of smex... :D

Nice :D LEAVE CLOUD ALREADY!

OMFG.
Okay, like I just found this story today AND I COULD NOT STOP READING IT. Let me tell you something; you have real talent. The way you write Vincent's character and his outlook on everything is just fantastic. And his relationship with Tifa? Gosh, I love it! At first I thought this might be another lemon-y fanfic, but I'm so glad I was wrong! This is probably the best VinTi I've ever read :)
I hope you update soon, or I'll go crazy xD Keep up the great work!


~IF