Love this and the ending.

Ooh, I like this.

Short, but very well done! Great job! Poor Orochimaru...

That was so, so cute! XD Fantastic job! Two thumbs up!

Aw! This is sad! Great one-shot! :)

Sad... I loved it!

The story is kinda sad and yet sweet at the same time.

Oh, such a sadly sweet fic, I loved it.

...(tear) That made me cry... and it was heartwarming and sad and lovely... and this is now one of my favorite pairings... and (sniffle)... yeah... this is great - good job!

i liked it

That was very nice :3 ( certainly better than my stuff ) 3

Its good to see some JiraOro-ness ;.;

Keep up the good work!

*cries* Why do u make your stories so sad. *bawls in the corner*

Inner Mika: Lets get Mr. Crowbar

*stops crying out of fear* No! NOT MR. CROWBAR *hides behing inner self*

*Snaps out of it* well i loved it but it was really sad. Well i love your stories anyways.

Nice. LOVE.

...Oh...I almost started crying.

That was so sweet. And so sad, too...

I love this one shot. It's very touching, and the ending just hit me head-on. Very believable, and it makes me wonder what really would have happened if Oro hadn't pulled himself away.