I love this story, just like all of yours! You are an excellent writer, how about a new story:)?!

Are you sure this is the end? Good story..but did they get the Triumverate to cave? Did Jarod find his mom? Did they start a new Centre?

You really need to do a sequel with the Triumvirate going down and being destroyed. Please?

please update again soon

Loved it! Fantastic ending! Hope to read something from you very soon again!

Great end to a great story, especially the "get your hands off my man" scene with the waitress. But I knew there was a reason why I never liked Willy ;-)
I hope we'll see more stories from you soon. Thanks for sharing, Cathy.

Bravo! I love it when a story comes full circle. And oh yeah, Parker was jealous. lol

Wonderful story, Mercy. Miss Parker finally unmasked those feelings of hers towards Jarod. I loved it when she reached out for Jarod's hand, much to his surprise, just so that waitress would somehow catch the hint that the "pretender" was hers.

I enjoyed this masterpiece of yours very much. Will be waiting for your next one. Thank you for such a happy "beginning" for them.

I love the ending where Sydney's telling the story... BRILLIANT!

Anna

>"Well, let me see." Sydney began, immediately obtaining both men undivided attention.<

What a delighful ending
Can't wait for part II
Nans

It has been a great journey -the hurts and sorrows will all be quieted by the happiness that lies ahead. MP had missed a turning point once or twice, but when she gets it right, she really gets it right. Thank you for having it turn out happily: there is work to be done, but we are satisfied that it will end well, that J and MP will be happy and together. So glad that Sydney was there to see, that Broots helped work some magic, and that Sam sees and knows the truth. Thanks - already I am looking for more writings from you. Thanks for sharing with us!

Great fic! Congratulations!

Hey!

Well i was not expecting you to end it here... is hould have paid more attention your note at the beginning, but i was entirely shocked when i saw the The End.

I liked how you progressed Jarod's and MP relationship, it was very well done in my opinion.

I'm sorry it's over, but it was great while it lasted. Hope your muse finds a new story for you soon! - K

Enjoyed this story very much,look forward to reading more of your work. julie

That was absolutely wonderful. You are my favorite Pretender author. You create intriguing, compelling stories that end the way we fans want them to and yet still manage to keep them both in character. That's a rare gift and thank you for sharing it with us.

Great story. I really liked it.

Hope to see more of your stories in the future.