 MysticSorceror 2008-08-17 . chapter 1Things I liked:
Aww the kid sounds so cute - adorable! *squee* and Sora's a cute name too but i think on the minds of many it will always be a reminder of Kingdom Hearts, lol.
I love the set up that you've devised
Aww, I really really like how big a part of Sora's life Yuki is getting to be
Kyo really is great with her
It's cute how she's named after the sky and it's good that Tohru still thinks about Kyo
Excellent ending paragraphs - book worthy
Ways to improve:
Use knelt instead of kneeled
~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Some awkward structuring
Once again the perfection feels sort of Fairytaleish
Sora's incredibly spoiled o.o
"not much people" should be "not many people"
Tohru and Kyo both seem a bit OoC |
 Sora Kumiro-Aijin 2008-04-12 . chapter 1my life is like this but im only 13 so i just got my father back and wish he had died insted |
 samjosam 2008-03-24 . chapter 1 whoops sorry wrong story i meant the first one! |
 samjosam 2008-03-24 . chapter 1 i read this a year ago and just found it again! it still makes me cry! poor tohru! |
 storylover1234 2008-02-26 . chapter 1wa no way! i thought the sequel would b a little different than this...oh well i liked it ALOT anyway! btw i'v read all the chapters so...plz continue?!-_^ |
 Rain's Child 2007-03-19 . chapter 1NO WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY "or at least it would be if my mother was still here" TT__TT no please update soon i wanna see kyo back with tohru |
 kisa-chan-2006 2007-01-15 . chapter 1 Omg, you have to update sooner. holy crap, I cried at the end of the first story. Oh my god...literally, it was...unexplainably good! Please update this story soon! |
 Priestess-Kagome-Sama 2006-12-28 . chapter 1Wow. I would like it very much if you made another chapter! PLEASE!Well good luck bye! |
 animefreak4ever 2006-11-26 . chapter 1 love it love it love it! you must keep writing, i want to no more, its absulutly fantastic, hope you update soon! |
 tigerlion 2006-11-04 . chapter 1I loved Bind by Destiny, Totured by Fate and i love how this is starting out. Continue please! |
 Neko Warrior 2006-10-01 . chapter 1Sora... *is thinking of Kingdom Hearts* I thought that was a boy's name... ha ha. Silly me. Anyway... I think it's great so far. =D I'll be looking foreward to the next chappie! *adds story to story alert* Hmm... Sora... *is still thinking of Sora from Kingdom Hearts* heh heh... XD |
 Amester 2006-09-10 . chapter 1i love you for making a sequel! continue!! update sonn! |
 mollymilkshake 2006-09-06 . chapter 1very very good ... please continue it |
 Angelite Phoenix 2006-08-29 . chapter 1Ooh this sounds very interesting...please tell me that Kyo does get to see Tohru again!! :D...oh well, gues i beta find out, anyway, plx update soon! |
 Rayn Lake 2006-08-27 . chapter 1ok oh my god tohru isn't dead is she. i really (hope) amd think she's not dead. oh i hope kyo and tohru get back together and be happy and sora is happy with her family. um.. question why does sora hate her father. ok oh my god(again) please UPDATE SOON! |