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MysticSorceror
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Things I liked:
Aww the kid sounds so cute - adorable! *squee* and Sora's a cute name too but i think on the minds of many it will always be a reminder of Kingdom Hearts, lol.
I love the set up that you've devised
Aww, I really really like how big a part of Sora's life Yuki is getting to be
Kyo really is great with her
It's cute how she's named after the sky and it's good that Tohru still thinks about Kyo
Excellent ending paragraphs - book worthy

Ways to improve:
Use knelt instead of kneeled

~Myst
Things that I didn't like:
Some awkward structuring
Once again the perfection feels sort of Fairytaleish
Sora's incredibly spoiled o.o
"not much people" should be "not many people"
Tohru and Kyo both seem a bit OoC
Sora Kumiro-Aijin
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
my life is like this but im only 13 so i just got my father back and wish he had died insted
samjosam
2008-03-24 . chapter 1
whoops sorry wrong story i meant the first one!
samjosam
2008-03-24 . chapter 1
i read this a year ago and just found it again! it still makes me cry! poor tohru!
storylover1234
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
wa no way! i thought the sequel would b a little different than this...oh well i liked it ALOT anyway! btw i'v read all the chapters so...plz continue?!-_^
Rain's Child
2007-03-19 . chapter 1
NO WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY "or at least it would be if my mother was still here" TT__TT no please update soon i wanna see kyo back with tohru
kisa-chan-2006
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
Omg, you have to update sooner. holy crap, I cried at the end of the first story. Oh my god...literally, it was...unexplainably good! Please update this story soon!
Priestess-Kagome-Sama
2006-12-28 . chapter 1
Wow. I would like it very much if you made another chapter! PLEASE!Well good luck bye!
animefreak4ever
2006-11-26 . chapter 1
love it love it love it! you must keep writing, i want to no more, its absulutly fantastic, hope you update soon!
tigerlion
2006-11-04 . chapter 1
I loved Bind by Destiny, Totured by Fate and i love how this is starting out. Continue please!
Neko Warrior
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
Sora... *is thinking of Kingdom Hearts* I thought that was a boy's name... ha ha. Silly me. Anyway... I think it's great so far. =D I'll be looking foreward to the next chappie! *adds story to story alert* Hmm... Sora... *is still thinking of Sora from Kingdom Hearts* heh heh... XD
Amester
2006-09-10 . chapter 1
i love you for making a sequel! continue!! update sonn!
mollymilkshake
2006-09-06 . chapter 1
very very good ... please continue it
Angelite Phoenix
2006-08-29 . chapter 1
Ooh this sounds very interesting...please tell me that Kyo does get to see Tohru again!! :D...oh well, gues i beta find out, anyway, plx update soon!
Rayn Lake
2006-08-27 . chapter 1
ok oh my god tohru isn't dead is she. i really (hope) amd think she's not dead. oh i hope kyo and tohru get back together and be happy and sora is happy with her family. um.. question why does sora hate her father. ok oh my god(again) please UPDATE SOON!
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