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| Grievous Daydreamer 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseFLUFF! I love it! Everyone is so in character, and thank God it stayed realistically one-sided. ^_^ Hilarious! |
| Frosty Pig 2007-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the end, Ayame blushing is just too sweet. Is there going to be more? Awesome story! |
| Belladonna Andromeda 2006-09-13 ch 1, | abusethat was so cute! really nice |
| Shikoku 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseAh this was so cute! I loved it. ^_^ |
| KooriKitsune 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAw! Kawaii! ^_~ |
| JezzieKyon 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAh! So kawaii! Hatori-Chan kissing Aya-Chan! Hott!! ^__^ |
| Kyonkichi89 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, how cute! ^.^ You write beautifully and the plot is believable and funny. The thought of Ayame directing a play makes me laugh. Were there any actors besides him and Hatori? I'm sure with him as the director, it'd be a one man show. Ok I'm slightly confused. Is this a one-shot (because it seems like it could stand alone, maybe) or are you continuing? If you are, well that's great and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Adi88 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseDon't apologize for using Sleeping Beauty! No fairy tale is ever worn out; they are the prototype of our collective subconscious! They are not cliched, they classic! CLASSIC I SAY. Ahem. I realy like this. Lovely fluff, but not made unrealistic by Hatori abruptly realizing that all he wanted from life was Aya's love after one kiss. Plus... everyone, so in-character... Such honest writing, but with funnies too. Many happies. Am favoriting. |