stupid molly weasley. i wanted to throttle that woman for the way she treated sirius, honestly. in my opinion he was a much better parent than she was, despite his issues. having more kids than a basketball team does NOT make you a good parent. apparently just a judgemental one.

It's not too long at all! The longer, the better in fact.

And I really like this story. I hope you update soon!

Christ, you turned Hermione into a total **.

very good more please

I like it. I just have to ask, are you going to make it Ron/Harry? Because it certainly seems like it. Until you next update,
Lady Halaia

Update soon! I wanna know what happens! Have a feeling it isn't gonna be what me and Sirius want though...stupid Lily always getting James. But maybe i'll be surprised?!?!?! Please!?!?!?

more...more...plz?

Can't wait for more.

is the missing page the letter to James?

NICEY 8D I think the perspective-thing worked out great.
...anime character...? First, I thought of Shuichi (da rock star thingy xD), but he's too uke for that... So, acctually, I have no idea ^^ Be sure to tell who sometime xD

I can't wait for more.

great chapter

YAY! I love this story so far, everyone is excellently in character. I have to say though, it would be nice if you used contractions a bit more. Sometimes you say things like "have not" or something, and it sounds a bit awkward. Other than that, I am completely in love with this fic, and I can't wait until you update again. And am I the only one seeing slight Ron/Harry vibes?

Sugoi chapter, koi-kins! =^^= I love it! The scene with Dumbledor was great. XD Messing with Harry's head like that. *snickers* Porr Harry, though. Finding out his godfather was gay... and in love with his father, no less. *eyes spin* @_@ So much to take in all at once. At least Harry would undestand these kinds of things, though. *wink* ^_~

Anyhoo... *looks it over* I don't see anything that needs to be changed or revised in any way. I shall discuss this with you in depth tomorrow night on YIM. *howls in excitement* I can't wait to create more memories with you there. =3 Great times are coming back on YIM! ^_^ Woot! We can also discuss the 3rd chapter to this story. Hazzah! =P

See ya on YIM after I get off work. I love you, sweety. *chu*

with love,
Yo wolfie pharaoh

Nice plz update soon