yes so i am not the only one to spot the al send armour plothole

Bittersweet tragedy, so very beautiful that i think it's lovely enough as it is. You've portrayed Ed's anguish so fiercely, shown Riza's quiet understanding & comfort so characteristically...i wholeheartedly loved it.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze

Freakin update already. I waqnna see more of ur work. IT'S AWSOME.

DUDE UR STORY IS AWSOME DO MORE CHAPTERS

Lovely, absolutely lovely. Thanks for writing this little gem, which reflects perfectly the fantasy/drama tone of the series through Ed and Riza's words and actions. You have a great talent for in-character dialogue and description. Write prolifically, for the benefit of your readers!

It's very tragic, you can feel Edward's pain. Riza is a very responsible person and has the correct temperment to care for him in such an emotional state. I applaud your courage for taking on this couple, more people should do so.

HOORAY YOU DID IT XD AND ITS GREAT,NOW ITS YOUR TURN TO GIVE ME A CHALLENGE XD Just no Maes and RIza please '

Iloved how you put some roywin in there XD

Dude... this was awesome! I loved how you used the different words... very nicely done! You even got a little bit of RoyWin in there ;) And I loved the ending... Riza and Ed can mourn together... anyway, great job as always!