This is one of the best fics I've seen this song in (I love this sonf by the way). Good job!

It was more song than story, which was disappointing because I could kind of see what you were getting at with the song. There was a lot more that could've been said that wasn't.

love the song...not sure about the story. until the end that is. the ending is very good, becasue that's how i feel about DMC.

i said it once and i'll say it again... i HATE elizabeth, pre-DMC. i think that she only contimplated the thought of loving jack, but still really loves will.

so i compliment you on a job done well...

Wow, that's deep stuff Rach. Hehe. Very nice.

Nice job! I love this song, so I had to read this!

wow. this is really good. i love how he is at the end, slightly in denial, but more accurate than he realizes. ...good choice of song, too. ^^