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Reviews For: Hospital Meetings & Good Friends

Writer4eva123
2007-12-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is cute and very well written!
Kesah
2006-08-20
ch 1, anon.
abusevery good post more soon
A. Nothing
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseThis was short, and you didn't give it a chance to materialize...

Also it seemed a bit awkwardly written, being written in the 'you' form. I think if you would of stuck to first person or third person, more details would have come through, and the flow would be nicer.

Over all, it was sweet and to the point...

Nice try.
sienna
2006-08-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseu know, this is good, pretty good actually im quite surprise there isnt alot of reviews and that you havent update. im tellin you , i really really like it and i would like to read more. i dunno it seems like a ff i would like to follow as you keep updating, the begining started good and got me hooked which is one of the hardest things for writers to do to me, but u did it.
Courtney77
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abuseI love Cremma! I hate that they drifted apart with not much explanation other than Craig getting popular, lol. So..update soon, please!
xocrazililkelox
2006-08-16
ch 1,
abusegreat story it was sweet this is the first Cremma story / one hitter i read
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