i love this storyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

.gawd. My heart is being ripped out of my chest. Holy crap. Why can't they ever be happy. Why does the world hate them?! But it actual reviewing news, I like how you have made the canon love interests. Aang is still in character and not horrible and Mai... You made Mai tragic. And it makes me sad. I always hate Mai but now I actually do feel for her. So great writing. You pack so mic emotion in, it's really harsh.

Ugh. Zutara. This chapter literally made my stomach turn and do flips. I got emotional stress from it. It was sooooo good.

Ok it's like 1 in the morning, but I really want to keep reading. The ending of three almost brought me to tears. I wasn't so sure about your writing and your story when I first started, but I kept going and I must say I'm happy I did. Im very excited to keep reading, but that might have to wait until tomorrow haha.

I think the beginning is absolutely wonderful, I love all the detail :)

I like Katara...but she's annoying me. Who cares what people say, their gonna tAlk! Always, love is stronger! It's the same pattern, she's going to leave, Zuko's going to be hurt, Katara will regret her actions but say its for the best then they'll reunite and want to be together. Probably someone going come along durning their steppe ration to try and separate them more... Sigh... Oh the unnecessary drama making mad. But I'm enjoying the story regardless of my irritation

So I have to review on this chapter because the first time I read it I reviewed on the last one so it won't let me again:P Anyway it was just as great the second time around:) I took my time reading it this and I realized that there were a lot of things I missed because I read it so fast. Well I can't to wait to read it a third time( which probably won't be for a little while)! P.S. If you have any good Zutara fics that you've read or heard I would love it if you would let me know what they are:)

I love it! All the Zutara fluff was really exciting and enjoyable, with all the sexual tensions and all! XD One thing I'm also glad for is Aang's character. Unlike other fics, Aang isn't as villainous when it came to Katara. I almost thought that he'd end up with Toph, but their friendship is totally cute without it too. Suki and Sokka's romance was cute too, especially when Sokka had to explain Yue to her. And Mai and Ty Lee, I liked them a lot here, especially Mai. I felt really sorry for her, but I'm glad she didn't end up being a bitch. Somehow, I had a feeling that Haru and Jet were made for Ty Lee and Mai in this fic. ;P
Thanks for the great read! I just had to finish the whole thing overnight! :D

i think this is the best avatar fan fic i've read. everything is so beautifully put into detail and it flowed through. 10/10 for context and detail... but even though i am a retired grammr nazi some of it didn't make sense at times... still loved it though

This is absolutely beautiful. I have no other words to say for this heavenly piece I have just devoured, lest I'll erupt into a full-blown rant, and I'm sure you've had more than your fair share of that.

Anyhow, I just love how you always make them meet at the gardens during the times they are together, it really gives off symbolism to the place, although sometimes it can get a little repetitive.

A few typos scattered throughout the chapter, but not much that it affected the enjoyment derived from this masterpiece. Well done!

I really loved this story. I thought the characterizations and angsty-ness were great. Just one comment- where did all the reputation/honor concern go at the end? I mean, I could sort of understand, they've been through a lot, but during the middle, Katara, an unmarried female, was in a lot of trouble being seen "sleeping" with Zuko. But then, when she's possibly pregnant before any type of official engagement, everyone's really calm about it? And it continues in the palace afterwards? In the world you created, wouldn't that really make a bad reputation for her? I really liked the story- just confused at a bit of inconsistency (in my eyes at least) at the end.

I started reading this story this mourning and well I didn't stop until I was finished. I loved the way that it was written and how smooth the transitions were. It was a wonderful story that made me laugh, cry, and smile:) I also loved the plot and all the twist and turns in it. I really liked how it ended as well, when I first started to read it I was worried that they wouldn't end up together and they did so, I was very happy. All in all, I loved every second of this story and I will most defiantly read it again:)
P.S. This was the first Avatar fanfic I've read so, all the other ones have a lot to live up to:)

Oh my god.

You are killing me here! Like I think little pieces of my soul are being torn away at each chapter! Mostly because of all the angst and sadness and awful feelings from Zuko and Katara. And now because you have probably set up one hell of a reunion for everyone. Oh my god! What the hell is going to happen!

All of the painfully awkward moments! All of them!

And I meant to ask before but with all the nobles pretty much controlling Zuko's love life in the moat infuriating ways... Isn't he the Fire Lord? Why can't he just say 'No!' and that be the end of it... I mean I know he needs their 'support' but it doesn't seem a very democratic political system... Then again I am Zutarian biased... Haha.

Now I shall go on and read the rest of this fantastic epic :D.

ohhh i love it

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