 Xiao Hui Lang 2009-10-11 . chapter 25I loved this story so much! It's really a shock to me how you can write so much, so good, in just one month! You, my friend, are THE BEST Zutara writer EVER.
Congratulations!
Xiao Hui Lang XD |
 The Crushinator 2009-10-03 . chapter 25You really know how to tell a story! I read it all through in a few bursts over a three day period. Thank you for writing this. And, I must say, judging from the length of time this went from publication to completion, that your speed is astonishing. |
 Waterbender Nina 2009-09-19 . chapter 25this was the first fanfiction story i ever read, im feel in luv it the min i read it. |
 PnayBabyGurl (didn't log in) 2009-09-13 . chapter 25 I don't have much time to leave a proper review so I'll come back to this once I do. Just know that I absolutely loved this story! It probably had more angst than I would've liked but I enjoyed the whole ride. You kept all the characters in character and that's what helped me visualize everything. I laughed, cried, fumed, and squealed in delight throughout these past 25 chapters and thoroughly enjoyed every moment of it. I didn't mind the length of it at all. On the contrary, I rather enjoyed it! The progress and flow was spot on and near the end I couldn't help but wonder why this hasn't been made into a movie yet. Hehe You'll be hearing from me again once I get some free time to type up the review.
Until then, I hope you keep writing more Zutara!
-Mina |
 xyzisme 2009-09-06 . chapter 25Good job! Your quick updates (as I can make out from the dates) are commendable! |
 xyzisme 2009-09-06 . chapter 17I like this chapter, and how you've set up everything, but I'm confused! Didn't Iroh say earlier that 'even Azula' had applied for the culture program (harem :) ) within the Fire Palace? |
 xyzisme 2009-09-06 . chapter 16I've been reading this story recently (FINALLY, a lot of people had recommended it), and I can't call it easy reading. The chapters are long and the introspection a lot. It is not very similar to the series (probably since you started it a while ago) However, don't think of this as a criticism in any way! I have enjoyed reading this story, and I hope to see more!
One suggestion I would offer is to tighten up the plot a litte - just bring up the pace a notch. :) |
 Shichinintai'sGoddess 2009-08-19 . chapter 25AW that was so cute! I LOVED THIS STORY! |
 liaz23 2009-08-16 . chapter 25 omg..
this story..
im at loss for words.
you captured the emotion beautifully,
there was a great sense of friendship, and family,
not to mention humor && wonderful romance.
i must say zuko's proposal brought me to tears.
you write amazingly,
&& this story is by far one of the best!
*&& thts saying something; stories on here are good, but not too many are breathtaking*
needless to say, i LOVED it.
thank you soo much! |
 liaz23 2009-08-16 . chapter 22 what did it look like he was doing? he was feeling her up.
lmaoo! [feeling 'iroh's arm' up] :pp
&& when Zuko lost his patience
&& put Katara over his shoulder to board the ship
*with a straight face*
hilarious! |
 liaz23 2009-08-15 . chapter 16 i REALLY liked how jet && katara parted.
it was a nice way to really capture how he changed && wasnt gonna try anything.
*seriously i read it over like 3 times;; it was smooth && friendly like i would appreciate it done to me :]]*
i loled at zuko's accusation for iroh's new teapot:
"from who? the tea fairy?"
:pp |
 Unknown Reader 2009-08-01 . chapter 25 I can't even begin to describe how much I loved the is story! It was so epic and romantic and I couldn't wait to finish. Excellent job, this story was probably one of the finest fan fictions I've read in this category. Well done!
Congrats,
Unknown Reader |
 Muted Trumpet 2009-07-30 . chapter 25This story is great. It was very emotional and reading it was really enjoyable. |
 ugeisha 2009-07-22 . chapter 25So lovely! I'm really glad they found a happy ending. I have to say, one of the best things about this story was a nice refreshing characterisation of Katara. For once, she wasn't angry at Zuko and he had to make it up to her; she just cared for him and gave into him and accepted his love. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! |
 ugeisha 2009-07-21 . chapter 3This chapter was especially beautiful, so emotional and heart wrenching. Fantastic writing! |