woah...

i love it! i dont think that the ending is confusing. i have read it really many times once in a while...
but now to the point! i love the way you wrote it! i think that they are so in charcter.the plot is really good too. and i think i get the moral...

good luck with writhing!

I love it!
Ive probably read it over 10 times!
I just love the way that you put the russian roulette in it, a reaally good idea the whole thing! I give it a 100++/10!!
`A blink of an eye is all it takes.´ I love that line!
I wish you health, happiness and everything good in your life!!

Scary o.O So Gojyo sort of died as well?
Well... let's just think Hakkai can figure out in the moring what happenened and maybe he and Goku'd do the same thing as well.
Total tragedy >.

I wouldn't call you crazy, I think we all play the same game as Sanzo did. Though it's not always with a gun. I know I'm been in some bad spot off and on and there is away a chapter in one of my stories that shows it.

But what I find to be the best is those people who don't pull the trigger. Life is full of **, only a coward is willing to play the game. However the real challenge is in the choice of living. For one reason, everything that you care about could be gone in a blink of an eye.

Sincerely,

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

(dropped jaw)...WHAT...THE...HELL~!?

I noticed a few mistakes:

1: "dessert" should be "desert";
2: "Ones" should be "once", and lastly;
3: Even if Sanzo HADN'T put all that suicidal ** behind him when he was 17, Gojyo would have NEVER, in a THOUSAND years, just stood by and watched Sanzo try to off himself; he would've knocked his ** out, taken the gun, and dragged him to Hakkai to let their resident mommy put the fear of God into him. And even if he HADN'T, Kanzeon would have interveaned to keep Sanzo from dying.

I never read those suicide fics where someone's cutting themselves. This was better and more original. Interesting, to say the least. Sad and bitter, but I liked it. I would have gone with a sad ending too. Great job, all in all.

-pl