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Reviews for: Lonely Nights
DeeDee200
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
This is a really awesome story, it's fluffy and very cute and the whole, not allowed to say love, thing is great ^^

And i love the end bit 'Passion was the only thing that the two were thinking about as Sasuke pulled Naruto into the shower. And it was the only thing that Naruto was thinking about as he pulled Sasuke into their bedroom.' That's so awesome, i don't know why but i felt all fuzzy inside, hehe.
sweetpotato1992
2008-05-18 . chapter 1
that was so adorable!
A.J. Torres
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
Aw, it was a cute one-shot! Lol you did spell Ichiraku wrong but there it is-Ichiraku! XD I thought it was real touching, the story!
MayIFall
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
Oh wow...this is so sweet!!
I haven't read anything like this in a long time. It's got the right touch of angst. It's perfect!!
I am glad I stumbled upon this fic.
I really like it! ^^
-_~
2006-08-18 . chapter 1
The romance in this fic was about as lighthearted, fluffy as possibly could be. It was very sweet. However, concerning Sasuke and Naruto's characterizations, I felt that they were OOC. Sasuke was w/o his "usuratonkachi" or "dobe" comments; Naruto's more-than-usual negative aura just didn't match the character in the series. Don't get me wrong, this was a well-written romance story; the problem simply rested with the characterizations, because it didn't feel like I was reading about Sasuke/Naruto, maybe another couple, but not them. -_~
Alley-Oop
2006-08-16 . chapter 1
Aww! It was adorable. i love how you repeated the first paragraph, although it did catch me off guard at first. I think this is my favorite oneshot so far. I haven't written a Naruto fanfic yet, but I'm trying to get around to it. I've doe a few Jak and Daxter ones whipped out, though.

I'd love for you to finish and upload ALL og your Naruto fics. They're wonderful. Your writing is fabulous. Great job! :P
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