Perfect! I really enjoyed this story!

I liked that!

Great chapter!

Our minds must run in the same circles...I've thought of Harm and Mac when I hear this song.Sometimes stories don't have to be long to be good.You've captured both characters,in how they act,how they think.

great story.

Well, I usually like long stories that are very descriptive, but I gotta tell you, you did an amazing job at getting so much feeling into so few lines! A delight to read, I absolutely loved it!

I like the story line, but indeed its really short. Try to elaborate on everything he does he feels he says idk. everything. Try to add some atmosphere because its a little too rushed now.

great story.

Are you continuing this if so could you please lenghthen the chapters.

Please say there will be more chapters (and ones that are a bit longer, even)!