Let's pretend that it hasn't been ages since I've read your stuff. Let's pretend that I've been keeping up with your work from the start and am NOT just trying to catch up in the spare minute that I have now. (guilty look)

Yzak goes to the bathroom when he's pissed? Piss because pissed? Was that a play on words or just something hilariously random that you thought up? :P

"Initiating ego inflation. Beep." Bwahahaha, awesome.

Yay, the Heliopolis mission! So brief in the actual canon, just to get things started, but seriously one of my favorites. That and Artemis. And actually, the Mendel Colony part was... Okay, I'm biased. I liked it all. I think my LEAST favorite was the part on earth with the Desert Tiger... Wow, this has nothing to do with your story. I am so sorry. I've just been SEED deprived lately.

"They would land. They would steal the Earth Forces mobile suits. They would get the hell out of there." Another part I really liked for some reason. Probably because the brevity hits you with a punch.

Description of Creuset as a "white-beaked sentinel?" Excellent.

Oh man, I love your description of the whole operation. Not too much, so you don't make what we already know sound boring, and you added some new stuff, just enough bits to make it original. It's all around nicely pulled off.

"Hello Blitz, my name’s Nicol. Nice to meet you. I know we’ve just met, but I’m going to steal you now, if that’s okay." You write Nicol so adorably. I can totally see him saying something like that to his Blitz. Aw, damn, that is just so freakin' cute! I wanna cry!

When Athrun whispered "Kira," my stupid mind jumped to Death Note. Oh, that's it. I've been focusing on that damn series too much. I seriously just PANICKED, because I thought one of the gundam boys was about to die from a notebook. Holy christ, I am disgusting. I need to go back to being SEED's woman only. Augh. Good thing your wonderful fanfic is reminding me why I love the series so much.

Anyway, this was a great chapter. Nicol's POV makes it very real and tangible. Well done, and sorry for not keeping up with all your stuff.

BWE! This is a good story! I love the way you incorporated the actual script into this part! It fit perfectly! PLZ UPDATE!

Aww, Nicol's soft-heartedness just makes me bawl all over! Continue his silent admiration for the puurrfect Athrun! (as long as you don't get too far!) I can totally relate to him (for some reason!)

Things are going a-okay here, but please, oh pretty please, don't make the cute Nicol gay! EVAH!!

It was the title that caught my interest :P
Overall,it was like having tiramisu,or mocha,maybe.Smooth,well-blended, angst with a touch of humor ^^ smart,witty humor.
And Nicol here totally shines,despite his sometimes dark thoughts.His Athrun-worship actually looks kinda cute to me :P I like the way Nicol is portrayed here.He is kind, hates war,killing,or even hurting other ppl,and sure he is somewhat shy,acts a bit timid.But he has his streak of nasty-ness too(thou he doesnt feel the need to direct it upon others)^^ feels just like Nicol ^^
Guess I'll b waiting for the next chapt to come =>

*And the super awesome beta faithfully reviews as promised*
:D
I see you went with my suggestion, that makes Storm very happy, but did you have to rub in the forgotten attachment? ...Not that I don't deserve that, lol, :P I had a bit of a blonde moment.
Hope you get lots of reviews for this, I've probably mentioned it...or maybe not, but I do enjoy reading this fic, the characters are completely true to the way they were made, personality wise, but also have more depth as well.
Portraying the boys as they are is well done and very amusing with the way you throw them in thoughts (Nicol is turning out to be rather interesting in his point of view with things)
I could say more, but I think that would initiate the bloating of ego ;P, and I'm not sure if this even made any sense, lol, I'm sure you get it one way or another.
Kudos girl
Storm

Aw so sweet!

I love it! Nicol sweety!

hahahahah update soon :3

O_o please dont make Nicol gay... ><

its a really nice meaningful story, its quite deep. sad at times too.

thanks for the read.

hey, this is really well written, the story is awesome too :D:D.

i like nicol too!

I'm really enjoying this story. It's very well-written.

Ah! YOu watched the final phase too!? Hell! I didn't want it to end! And now their replaying again! *scowls* I wanna see the next Gundam Seed... *Sniffles* Ah well...as always, welcome, hope your doing well
Storm

That was so cute! I just love the way you talk about Nicol and his sensitivity! I loved it!

Oh my god, I love Dearka to death. He is the coolest guy ever. That little exchange between him and Yzak was so much fun to read; I practically died it was so amusing. "Athrunus animositus," is so funny. And those complaints that Yzak made sound just like him. Perfect job keeping him in character.

Hmm, what DOES Le Creuset do during his free time? xP Oh gods, I don't wanna know.

I absolutely love the weight of this chapter. The feelings that children should not have to fight a war were intendified, and I felt so bad for Nicol. You conveyed the sadness and the confusion well. Aww, and Athrun was so sweet when Nicol was crying... Oho, I loved the part when Athrun started thinking about Kira. LOVED IT.

Well then, I can't think of much else to say. *knows she still has to respond to your last PM, but is too lazy to write a long response back right now* Nice job as always! Bye bye.

*Sigh* I loves

"Insert cardiac arrest here." Oh my god, I love it. "Athrun was not prejudiced against smiling people." Another one of those clever lines that creates the perfect background image without any effort. Flawlessly executed. I LOVE the style you've written this in. (Have I said that enough times for it to get irritating yet?)

Another thing I caught was how amazingly in character you've kept Athrun. I mean, Nicol is hard for me to judge because he's not a lead role, but I know you have Athrun down. You even had him say, "Yeah, I guess you're right," in that typical way that he says it to Cagalli (twice!) in the dub, exactly in those words. It's cute, whether you added those details on purpose or not. You keep him so cool, so kind and intelligent. Too many people blow him weirdly out of proportion. (Probably I do as well 0_o)

Wow, Nicol really is abso-freakin'-lutely INFATUATED with Athrun, isn't he? Hehe. Oh, and you even have Yzak and Dearka so perfectly Yzak and Dearka-ish... I love their lines as well. (Oh how I thrive when those two go at it.) The way Dearka just eggs Yzak on is funny. And the Yzak/Athrun encounter. Oh, kill me with enjoyment. Too funny. And so typical. (My review is getting rather on the longish side, no?)

Oh good gods. The description of Le Creuset had me dying on the floor. I couldn't breathe from laughing so hard. But what was clever was the way you chose to describe his mask as "avian." It struck me as so unlikely that it was perfectly acurate. And then I thought about it, and his mask DOES make me think of a bird. Hmm. Clever.

"War is human. I am human, so I am War as well." That whole bit of reasoning was painful, because it's so true. Ouch. Feel that? Humans are so predictable and dangerous. Oh, but Le Creuset and his "evil plans" just made my damned day. Oh, this whole chapter was lovely. I can't wait for more!