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Ilse O'Hara
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseWow! This was one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read in my life. The characters are perfect, Annie is exactly as she is in the movie, and the whole piece is gorgeously written and very descriptive. Thank you so much for your time and effort on this piece!
Lainielove7
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is very well written! Great job!!

One suggestion: Make seperate chapters instead of one long story--this will help keep your readers attention

Other than that, an amazing job from an amazing writer. This story was beautifully written and deserves every single good review you have and are sure to receive.
Shadowcat719
2008-04-18
ch 1,
abuseYour story was very long, breaks and new chapters would be nice if they were added.
Goo d story over all!
T'eyla Minh
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseFinally, a GOOD Grace / Oliver fic. :D

This is bloody brilliant. It's gorgeously-written, perfectly in-character (you have Annie down pat) and just generally fantastic.

Those last two paragraphs are great as well;)

Can I hire you to write my other 'ships, too? I can only pay you in buttons, unfortunately... :)
EllisBelle
2007-09-27
ch 1,
abuseI think I've been waiting to read this story since I was 5. And what do you know, a couple of decades later, here it is. I always finished off the movie with an and-then-they-got-married-and-adopted-all-the-orphans. Grace and Oliver where probably the first couple I ever shipped. Seriously, this was just perfect. Just, wow. Dead in character for all of them and sexy as hell. You need to write more of this. Soon.
Araminta18
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abuseI was just browsing and found this wonderful little piece! Very well-written, and very believable, at least in context to the movie. Thank you for brightening my day! :)
ImSoMMAD
2007-05-22
ch 1,
abuseOh it was all so perfect! A gorgeous fic all round, well done, and I hope you write again soon!

xxStellaxx
OSUSprinks
2007-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI know I have read this before, so let me apologize for not reviewing until now. I loved this. The characters were perfect. His inability to express what he was feelings and her doubts were spot on. Beautiful job. Thanks for sharing.

Happy reading,
Sprinks
Genevievey
2007-03-08
ch 1,
abuseUm. Wow.
I ADORE Grace/Oliver (obviously, I wrote a fic about them) and I love what you've done with them. Realistic, romantic, and not too sachrine. Brilliant. I am highly impressed.
miss mcGonagle
2007-03-02
ch 1,
abuseI cannot tell you enough how much I enjoyed this fic. I think Grace and Oliver make such a wonderful couple and you've written them perfectly in character. Not only was your take on that part of the movie marvelous and romantic, but your writing style was superb. There were so many great lines from this fic that I couldn't possibly quote them all, so I can just say that this will not be the only time I read this.
Beautiful work!
Firstlady1408
2007-02-24
ch 1,
abuseLoved this I always wished we got to see more of Grace and Olivers relationship in the movie...the kiss was too short for my liking!! Great fiction you captured the characters perfectly! Love Jessx
gynji
2007-02-02
ch 1,
abuseABFAB! Great stories gotta love Grace and Oliver


> Well, except for the South Sea pirates, and the Nazis, and
> the smugglers, and the time Rooster escaped and tried to
> kidnap Annie...

please please please write more!
Quill of Minerva
2007-01-16
ch 1,
abuseEnjoyable story. I have a huge soft spot for Grace and Oliver and had often thought that it would have been nice to have a bit more of them together in the film.

Will you be tackling any of those stories you mentioned at the end? I will read for sure, if you do :o)
remusROXmySOX
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abusethat was the best annie story i have ever read. write more PLEASE! you have a wonderful talent. this is exactly the way i have always wanted them to be. yay! i have read this story so many times cause its so perfect.
Nr.Six
2006-12-31
ch 1,
abuseI really love this story! It's SO romantic and beautifully written!
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