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| midget 2008-04-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseomgaah ! i LOved it ! it actually made me cry at the end. you have to continue babe :] |
| chainganglegendkiller 2007-03-07 ch 6, | abuseYO ii SERiOUSLY ALMOST CRiED READiNG THiS CHAPTER! |
| Spinsgr11 2006-12-19 ch 6, | abuseaw jallie is so cute |
| heavenofdegrassi 2006-12-17 ch 6, | abuseAW!There having a baby!Write more soon!I usually don't Jallie's,(not that there is any)but I'll make an exception because this one is really good!I usually read Semma's just to let you know.You are a really good writer.Oh,and one more thing Post More Soon! |
| MHxxPAPER DOLL 2006-12-17 ch 6, | abuseaw. Ellie's pregnant. Aw, a little miniture Ellie or Jay! I hope it's a little miniture Ellie. It'd be so cute. A little girl wearing like, punkish clothes. I love that! Maegan |
| ifonlyuknew 2006-12-16 ch 6, | abuseaw! jaylie is so cute! |
| KackyWacky 2006-11-29 ch 5, | abusePlease do not stop it here! I want to know what happens with Jaylie's baby! I love your story especially the part where they make love! That is so sweet and romantic! I never knew that Jay could be that tender and loving! He is the best! You are a fantastic writer so please keep adding to this story! I can't wait to read more! |
| Michele 2006-11-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseI liked it, but it was hard to read without commas, or barely any. |
| MHxxPAPER DOLL 2006-10-31 ch 5, | abuseIf you would like to continue, continue. But if not, then don't. I really like the story, but I don't wanna tell you to do something that you might not wanna do because, believe me, I know how that is. Anyway, I just wanted to say 'just incase this is the ending' that it was a really great story. Heehee, funny ending, and I have a question. Is there going to be a sequel? |
| Gpunk 2006-10-31 ch 5, | abusewow i hope u add more cuase i love this story but it ended so fast |
| fadingrainbow 2006-10-29 ch 5, | abuseplease please please continue. i need 2 know jay's reaction and where this whole thing is gonna lead. it can't be the end. |
| jenny 2006-10-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseno complete. Continue! Jenny |
| ifonlyuknew 2006-10-29 ch 5, | abuseOMG THERE IS NO WAY THIS STORY IS COMPLETE. I NEED MORE DETAILS! PLEAZ PLEAZ PLEAZ CONTINUE! |
| MaryAuksi 2006-10-29 ch 5, | abuseNo! NO! Don't end this! I love this story! Don't you dare to end this :D |
| missingmyseanc 2006-10-27 ch 1, anon. | abusePMS PMS PMS PMS PMS PMS PMS PMS |