Reviews for Purify My Heart

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Kagz 2008-02-14 ch 4,	abuseWHAT HAPPENED I REALY REALY LIKED THIS STORY! WHY ARE'NT YOU UPDATING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE please update soon!
Demon Lover77 2007-04-22 ch 1,	abuseyour story was great i love it and add me to your favirotes from your faithfull servent Demon lOVER 77
Mysterious Miko of Moonligh... 2007-02-03 ch 4,	abuseThis is a great story so far! I can't wait to read more, So plz plz plz update asap! C=
EvilynMetal 2006-09-17 ch 4,	abuseI like the setting of the story so far. But there are flaws that are there (just like every story :) ) First off, in the first chapter you were talking about the fact that Kagome was not good with a bow and arrow, and now you are saying that she is just as good as kikyo or even better. Second, All your characters sounds the same. There is no additude when they talk. It's almost like they all have the same rage or emotions. Inuyasha getting mad is the same as Sesshy or kagome, when in fact, all personalities are so different. Third, Sesshy doesn't do tantrums lol. He is the level-headed one even when it come to kagome. though I guess if he is going to fall in love with Kags, there has to be some emotions. But I don't see him throwing a fit just b/c she loves inuyasha and not him, then to throw a even a bigger fit when he wants her to love him. You have done a very good job with Rin though. I think that is the one character that stand out the most from what I have read. I don't know if you want to keep the characters in character or if you are just going for the mild ooc. I can't wait for the next chapter though, I like your writing style. I am never lost on when something needs explaining, like the clothing. Ciao! until next time :)
Tsuki Kagami 2006-09-16 ch 4,	abuseI feel that this is going to be hilarious!
filledelmer 2006-09-16 ch 4,	abuseupdate! please?
Tsuki Kagami 2006-09-01 ch 3,	abusestarts sobbing Now look at what you made me do?? sob I love this story! Inu pops in Inu: Why are* you sobbing? Lindsay-chan: Because sob this damn author made me! sob Inu: I... want...BLOOD! turns to his full demon self Lindsay-chan:suddenly stops sobbing It's ok, that just means that it was a good story. Inu: reverts to normallY You better update soon!!... Or I Will take your BLOOD!!
Cheerleader#7 2006-09-01 ch 3, anon.	abuseThat was G-reat update soon and a littlemore sesskag ne
Chidori no Tenshi 2006-09-01 ch 3,	abuseO THIS IS GONNA GET GOOD! UPDATE SOON! p.s. i like the sess/kag pairings...
bankostuz-fair-lady 2006-08-31 ch 3, anon.	abusegreat great story update as soon as possible i love the story so far
Elvin BlueEyes 2006-08-31 ch 3,	abusewow interesting, i like it :) Update soon
anonymes 2006-08-22 ch 2, anon.	abuseUPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE! :D
buloy 2006-08-21 ch 1,	abusei understand your predicament when people just look at ur story and just flat out not read or review...its f-up, anyways i jus wanna say that maybe trying to put sesshie in a more attidu-like ways, though i understand he's head ovder heels over kagome. i thought it would be more "in" character if he like try to define his feelings for kagome first-before he charged in-you know--but the whole conceited "you'll marry me" thing going on with seshie keeps up with his ego/arrogance, that's aligned and good...sory if i let you down or anything but so far it's quite nice! keep it up. P.S: Naraku is a sick bastard! kill him!
Tsuki Kagami 2006-08-21 ch 2,	abuseThanks for using my Idea! I just thought it would be hilarious! Naraku could use the line that Mroku always uses, 'Will you bear my children?'!
Kristin 2006-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw only 2 chapters?...lol...i need more...MORE! :-D...good story ^_^...

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