Who is Senel's bride? Is it Shirley?

Nice story XD

...Wow! That's just incredible! I don't think I've ever seen a better depiction of the ShirleyxSenelxChloe triangle. Seriously. I love the wedding example. Chloe is his 'best man' and proud to be so but has momments where she wants to be the bride, but filling such a role would mean giving up pride. Pride in being able to carry herself across the threshold. That pride is more important then Senel's affection. trust over affection. I am SO faving this.

Very nice. You've written Chloe accurately well.

awesome

Really nice. It was well written, and not out of character. Great job. Too bad it was really short.

This is really, really good. I like the way you portrayed Chloe; it's just like her to have these kind of thoughts. I think it's great how you didn't just chuck Senel and Chloe together cuz I can't really see that happening (with Senel's stupidity). Making her yearn for him from afar but still stand by him is way more convincing!

Keep up the good work! D