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2008-09-02 . chapter 10
Good, but not great. Amusing at times, but never funny. It was also very disturbing... Extremely disturbing. The only thing that could make it more disturbing would be Sirius getting his wish granted. Hermaphrodite!Buffy..
G
2008-09-02 . chapter 7
A good story so far. Nowhere near great though.
G
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
Poor Sirius, living in a girl body. I suppose it's not so bad seeing as it is a Slayer body. It would be awesome to have that kind of power.
G
2008-09-02 . chapter 2
So far the only thing I didn't like about this was the skull referring to the death-eater masks. Admittedly I didn't pay all that much attention to that detail, so it could have been for their malnourished forms.
Asterisks
2008-03-27 . chapter 10
WOAH! that was extremely well written. Very cool crossover.
*thumbs up*
Enarra
2008-03-22 . chapter 10
This was astounding.
Anne-Marie
2008-02-06 . chapter 10
very interesting story, could use some sort of follow up where Buffy and Sirius have a face to face moment though :)
Tommy14
2008-01-18 . chapter 10
I love this gem of a story. I think it's a classic and so unusual.
Merrymow
2007-12-13 . chapter 10
I was wondering when you're going to update?
Twin Tails Speed
2007-11-04 . chapter 10
I think that this is the perfect end to this story.
Nefar
2007-10-28 . chapter 3
This chapter just blew it for me. I mean, I was happy with the way this was going - to wit, that you (a Buffy author) acknowledged that Buffy would be totally stomped by a HP universe wizard, but then... wait for it... OH NOES! LOL!BUFFYS!IMMUNE!LOL! This seems to me to be a really cheap way of getting Buffy out of a situation in which shee is severely outclassed. Instead of coming up with a creative way for her to contribute *within* her boundaries, you went 'F* creativity, I'll just have her be immune. LOL!

Do you know what one sign of a Mary Sue/Author insert is? The character having an ability that *no* other character has demonstrated.

Plus, why is Buffy at the Weasley's home? The Weasleys are a fairly regular large family - they don't cheerily welcome people into their home for no reason. Now, you could have established that reason, but instead it was just WHAM!, Buffy is at the Weasleys. (Note that this establishes her as an ultimate good-guy, because Weasleys are the epitome of all that is good, Light, and Gryffindorish.)
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2007-10-23 . chapter 6
sirius is so awesome
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2007-10-23 . chapter 5
stupid willow i was mad at her for bringing poor buffy back
and then super duper ** in "empty places" how ya goin kick her out of HER ouse?!
hmm?
hmm?
lol
no sure i like willow anymore sesaon 1-5 LOVED her
6 and 7, not so much...
iamkagomeiloveinuyasha
2007-10-23 . chapter 1
roflmao
LOVE buffy
Garnet Avi
2007-10-22 . chapter 10
Thanks for finishing. All in all, a very intriguing story. I prefer the happy endings myself (too much non-happy ones in real life), but this wasn't depressing. Rather... nostalgic comes to mind. Still happier than the "I was in heaven" from canon, I think.
I wish Sirius luck regaining his man-parts (Is that body still magic-proof? Boy, is that venture going to be amusing.)
Thanks again,
~Avi
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