Hey your story is rokin awesome I love it your really good at writing and i hope you can take over something also UPDATE PLEASE I CANT TAKE THE SUSPENCE.also i love how the story is going.

Whoa where is the last chapter? Seriously you had me on the edge of my seat for crying out loud! No really I'm not that angry. But you should continue this story whenever you get a chance.

Omg u are just like me, same interests, age and everything! Anyway, this is a review, so let's not get off the subject. Yeah you're a pretty fair writer and I want to read more.

How old is Alice? She was 14 and she's already had god-knows-how-many boyfriends? And sex? She's turning into Sarah Scanlon! She's turning into the MEGA-BITCH!

God, Alice has some anger issues...PMS!

You know at the end when Dracula goes "She is mine! MINE!" I thought for sure Darkness was gonna wack him upside the head for yelling at him or bitch slap him or something like that. HA! Wouldn't that be halarious if Dracula got Bitch slapped by Darkness?! ...awesome

love it it is awesome!
Demyx is a great character i think

luma_black

Hey Have you seen that movie Legend?

He's like the devil from legend! He wants Lily! I mean Alice!

Nice story!Alice is so cool when she's angry lol. I really love it! Though I didn't read all of it yet but I definitely will :-)
greetz: Wraith Fan -x-
Btw, Marishka's hair is blond, not brown. My hair is a darker blond then hers but I really, really hate it when people say my hair is brown... cause it's dark blond, not brown!lol

Very nicely done chapter, but I'm sorry, I need to reply to this review you got. I looked it up and read it and afterwards was kind of like... um...
#1: Dracula is ficticious.
#2: This is a DRACULA/OC fict.
#3: WHERE is it written that Dracula, as a character, has to be evil/son of satan, etc.? HAVE YOU PEOPLE EVER WATCHED BRAM STOKER'S DRACULA?! The Francis Ford Coppola film? That movie changed the way I viewed that man. Yes Vlad Tepes was an evil bastard who impaled thousands of Turks and even some of his own people, and yes, its true, his wife threw herself from the top of a castle tower and into a river because she would rather die than be captured by Turks and thrown into a harem... but people need to understand something.
Dracula/Vlad (whoever, it doesn't matter) was taken as a child and was TORTURED FOR YEARS! There is a good, legitimate reason the guy is F-ed up. No, I'm not justifying his history, nobody should. (I just realized what a pathetic fangirl I am :D)
As for the son of the devil/enemy of God ordeal... that depends on which version of the story you are viewing, who writes it, and whether or not Dracula is a villian or a misunderstood monster/human/man/whatever.
Just... people get WAY too into this sort of thing.
And besides, the REAL reason we all write Dracula ficts is because Richard Roxburgh is hotter than hell itself and his role as Dracula made that official. :D
Alright, I'm done ranting. I could go on for days, but I think if this person decides to read my review, I should stop now.
Its just... *sigh* I'm so putting my foot in my mouth and I don't want to offend anyone, but Van Helsing isn't all good either. He's the LEFT hand of God... a sinner, a murderer... and if you do your research, the whole myth of the left hand of God thing... that "fallen" angel isn't exactly good... or angelic. So there. :P
That was so immature of me. I apologize.
K. I'm done.
I'm going to go into hiding now.
I love your story hon! Keep up the good work.
-Rem

me again another fantastic story cant wait 4 ur next one!

Hmm... what lie is it that Alice is refering to? has it been mentioned already in the story. it is interesting the way you up the suspence by making something that the character thinks is unimportant a focal point. I find the conversation between Dracula and Demyx is interesting. I think the count needs to learn to see past his jealousy and see that Demyx really does care for Alice's well being. I hope that Lucifer doesn't win... I would not like that at all but it is your story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~ALANNA~

Great new chapter. I love it.

Well, I never thought I'd see the day when Dracula DIDN'T want sex... and there being nothing biologically or anatomically wrong with him either... he just doesn't want it. Wow. :D

Sorry it took me so long to review... you'd think with summer I'd have all the time in the world... ha ha... yeah right.

I confess I missed your story. Its nice and easy to follow and I'm glad you're doing better... I had to do a quick recap though before I read this chapter bc it had been so long since you had updated.

Long story short, its nice to have you back. I hope you know that if you need to vent or anything, you have my email address.. and the link to my PM.

Keep up the good work.

-Remember

awwsome chapter. i would go crazy without Dracula. I hope u continue soon