 TardisBluePen 10/7/06 . chapter 1omg totally awesome!
"Pushing back her hair (which she hadn’t had tied up since that jungle experience, something he took as a good sign) he ran his fingertips from her temple down to her neck, feeling her shiver under the barely there touch that he knew drove her crazy. As if wanting more contact, she grabbed his face with both her hands and crushed their lips even closer together and pushed him backwards onto the sand.
Damn, Sawyer loved it when she took charge."
OMG! seriously that was almost too hot for its own good! but in a good way of course!
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 missy42 8/17/06 . chapter 1First to review? Woot!
"Sawyer was surprisingly needy when it came to attention and getting a lot of it." - hehe!
"...he lowered the book further to show a blinding smile. Ana’s grin always seemed to do that to him." AW!
"She was the Vesuvius to his Pompeii and he could only hope that he could somehow get her to calm down before the little villagers were turned to cinder." OMG. I absolutely LOVE that metaphor! Kudos to you!
"Around other women he was able to charm the clothes off of them. Literally." LOL!
"I’ll always forgive you, Sawyer" AW!
"He tried to show her how he truly was sorry, and how he felt for her so deeply that it felt sometimes like he would go crazy if he wasn’t touching her" Yet another great big AW!
Oh, more warm and fuzzy Ana/Sawyer-ness! LOVE it! More soon please?
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