you know what keep it up! because i been searching incest fics here for almost a month! thank you! Please do more

Keep going...keep going...

wow... what can i say? this is one hell of a fic! it's awesome! it's original _ write more okie! and hope that u won't mind if i pick up on ur idea and write a fic bout it _ pls let me know if u mind... anyway hope to see more fics frm you!

THIS THING JUST SCREAMS OBSCENE! ice: eheheheheheh. sheepish smile. it was not unexpected... but... saturn: BUT IT WAS OUT-OF-CHARACTER ice: perhaps try to elaborate on it saturn: okay, to the constructive part: the impact of the last sentence would have been brought out if, IF, there's a good background story to go with it. i'll say the out of characterization spoils it all...ice: try approaching the subject in a not so crude way - all written after tiring spout of BioBLASTing.

... oh man...Kurei and Recca? i won't flame you or anything but like...oh man...*covers face with hand in shame*? oh well...this fic is quite ok...

Interesting. I don't exactly know what I feel about the fic but it is interesting. I cannot imagine Recca being initiative in this kind of situation since he seems to lack the particular nerve (hell, even with Yanagi he is hesitant!). Kurei sounds a little too mild to me. Nonetheless, it's your fic, you can do whatever you want. I still like it, and since I am getting this yaoi addiction -_-;;, please continue!