This was really good! I think it adds to your story that it's short; it makes the focus of the story more obvious.

beautifully written even with the absence of dialogue. i think the character and her emotions were captured perfectly. ;p two thumbs up!

That was wicked cool. Can you write a sequel?

update asap plpslpslps

oh so cute! I love Ron/Hermione jealousy. It's adorable :) There were some really cool lines in this story that I pointed out to you earlier, and the whole thing is very well written. And yay I got a shoutout! Thanks!